golden eyes - first version

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When your golden eyes looked at me

Craving with envy

I knew I couldn't resist you

Even if all of this could not be true


Who would've known

When I saw you at the entrance

That I would be completely blown

By the way our bodies dance


You told me you adored me

Sweet verity

You told me to look at you

Only tomorrow, to make me keep my gaze of you


I hoped we would be chasing stars

That you would be the one to heal my scars

Only to see

That even more, you hurt me


Oh, how I wish I would've been able to say no that day..


I just randomly found this first version of "golden eyes" that I was looking for when writing the second version hahaha. Which version do you like more? The original or the new one? Let me know! :)

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