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Judge Rainydusk

Now that I have read this, the title becomes emotional to me, and the book cover makes more sense -- strongly captures what the story is all about. The query style of the book description is also an effective hook. It feels personal and it goes hand in hand with the overall vibe of the plot.

The plot is interesting with the air of mystery; it contains the classic formula of a turn-back-time story that everybody can relate to.

The development of the main character is whole since the story is told in her perspective. Secondary characters are not introduced clearly but their roles keep building up as the story goes on. The narrative is easy to follow despite all the flashback inserted at the beginning. The third person (author's) voice is flowing and also consistent from the main character's perspective. I have also nothing to say much about grammar/typos, only very minor ones like the typo of the name of the main character "Sunny" slips with "Dara" in one part. Other than that nothing grave but all easy to fix flaws.

Overall, the story fits well for teen/young adult audiences -- a good read to have a peek and/or reflection of what's supposed to be in store for the future, and it is also best for adults who enjoy reminiscing the happiness of youth.