"Oh gosh Lou!" I saw wiping the mascara from my eyes.
"Last call for tickets!" yells the lady.
"I-" I stumble into Louis's arms as he kisses my ear. I smile.
"One more time to make it all better." I sing in his arm. I couldn't see it, but I could feel him grinning. He interlocks his fingers and mine as we stare into each others memorizing eyes. Slowly we lean when I feel a tug on my dress. I look down.
"Excuse Miss Erica but can I get a picture with you and Louis?"
"Of course!" Louis says. C'mon kid can't you wait til were done kissing. Louis's lips were like a drug to me, for I hungered for them. I feel his arm snake around my shoulder and pull me close as we grin for the picture. The girl thanks us and runs off.
"Let's go outside so we can pick up were we left off..." Louis whispers. I feel a chill run down my spine as his warm breath tickles my neck.
I nod as we walk out into the outside maze of trees. The loud rumble of thunder is music for the dancing lightning in the sky as the rain splats like tears on the wet pavement. Louis pulls me close, our noses touching, slowly...oh so slowly our lips starts to clash.
BLAME!
I scream pulling away. Lightning strikes a tree causing it catch fire and spreads to the others. Louis grabs my hand and guides me.
"How the f-," I begin as he yanks me around a bend.
"How does this stuff always end up happening to us." Louis smirks as he race towards shelter. The air is quickly consumed by smokes as we struggle to clamber through the fog. Slowly his hands slips away and I fall.
"Louis!" I scream, but hearing no response. I start to stand but soon am totally surrounded by the menacing flames. The dark curls of smoke suffocate my lungs as I choke for Louis one last time.
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How does one know the difference between death and a dream? I honestly couldn't tell.... Is it that in one you feel pain and the other not? And if so which is which? I saw my life flashing before my eyes if everything... mostly consisting of Louis. But I couldn't help but feeling I would never see him again, if I was indeed alive, but something in my heart refused to believe that. I swear I saw heaven. The angels singing and...
...and I thought saw Louis and could feel his lips against my own. Thing about death is its not a dream. You're not gonna wake up and find yourself in the screwed thing called life. Everything will be peaceful, surrounded with the ones you love, but I would be alone. You can't kill yourself if your already dead so it would just be waiting for internality for Louis to arrive... I guess I had made up my mind, ready to just die when I heard a faint crying sound. I listen intensely wishing my senses were more acute.
"Erica please!" I heard oh so softly.
"Please hang on! Don't leave!" There was a soft beeping sound. And then a new voice.
"Louis she's flat lining. She's not gunna make it."
"NO!" I heard. I felt someone grip my hand.
"Erica please stay alive. For me." My eyes fluttered open. I could have said many things at the moment. But the only thing I managed was
"Louis."
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(A/N):
Hi guys. Here is the new update! (Yay E, you finally updated after promising them it was coming quicker. You're such a dumb ass)
Anyway I really so promise to update more often now that it's summer and that I'll have more free time!
Please tell me what you like and don't like about this story in the comments below. I'm working on editing and changing bits of the story but nothing to drastic.
Have a good life everyone.
'Til next time,
E.xx
P.S. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE 1K READS ON THIS! IT MEANS ALOT!
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