Torn (TWD Fan-fiction)

A Horrible Night

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"Daryl you cover the back!"
Shane calls out as we all start to enter the building. As we walk inside Rick looks around and calls out, "Hello?" We walk in and look around, no one in sight. We hear a gun cock and we all point our guns towards the sound. There's a man standing behind the trigger. He's eyeing each of us one by one, "Anybody infected?" he calls out. Rick nods his head, "One of our group was. He didn't make it." He looks down with sadness in his eyes. The man lingers back a moment before walking closer to us, "Why are you here? what do you want?" Rick walks towards him a bit, pleading, "A chance." I look around as I think to myself, Surely there must be more people. Why is he the only one that came out? I let out a sigh of relief as the man says, "You all submit to a blood test. That's the price of admission." Rick looks over at us, we nod. He turns back to the man, "We can do that."

The man hesitates a bit before finally saying, "You got stuff to bring in, you do it now. Once this door closes, it stays closed." Rick, Shane, and Glenn run outside to pick up any bags that were left on the ground. The man walks over to a small keypad of some sort and speaks into the speaker, "Vi, seal the main entrance. Kill the power up here." Rick goes up to the man and introduces himself, "Rick Grimes." The man looks at him for a couple seconds, "Dr. Edwin Jenner." I furrow my eyebrows, "Dr?" He looks over at me, "Yes." I think twice about what I'm going to say but it just makes no sense to me, "Why would a Doctor greet us at the door? Why not, I don't know, a guard or military person of some sort?" He stays quiet and looks at all of us, "Come on, follow me."

He leads us to an elevator. I look over at Lori, "Isn't it weird that he just dismissed my question like that?" She shrugs her shoulder, "Ellie, I don't know.. but don't ruin this for us. Think about Carl." I pull her over to the side while we wait for the elevator to come down, "Think about Carl? Aren't I thinking about all of us? He's hardly given us any information." She puts her hand to her mouth as she thinks, "He shouldn't have to. He's kind enough to let us in. You're just being paranoid. If anyone else felt weird about this I'm sure they would have spoken up." and with that she walked back to Rick and Carl's side. I sighed and turned around to walk back when I noticed Daryl was in hearing distance. He was staring at me like he always did. He must really hate me. Maybe I should apologize for tackling him. I started to walk over to him when the elevator beeped and its doors opened. We all made our way inside.

It wasn't long after the doors closed that Daryl speaks up and says, "Doctors always go around packing heat like that?" I looked over at him and he looked at me, but not for long, he looked back over at Jenner. Jenner looks over his shoulder and says, "There were plenty left lying around I familiarized myself." I look over at Lori, she just looks down at Carl. Jenner smiles, "But you look harmless enough." he looks at Carl, "Except you, I'll have to keep my eye on you." Carl smiles back as Jenner chuckles. The elevator stops and as the doors open we find ourselves in a long hallway. He leads us down it. I walk towards the back of the group, behind Carol but in front of Daryl, I hate having people walk behind me. I feel like it's better to have a view of everyone.

Carol holds on tight to Sophia's hand as she asks, "Are we underground?" Jenner looks back at her, "Are you claustrophobic? If you are, try not to think about it." We come to a big dark room. Jenner walks in and calls out, "Vi, bring on the lights in the big room." We stop as the room brightens up. Jenner smiles, "Welcome to zone 5." I look around, still no sign of anyone. "Where is everybody? Other doctors, staff?" I ask hoping for an answer this time. He leads us to the middle of the room, "I'm it. It's just me here. That's why I was the one to greet you all at the door." Lori looks over at me and bites her lip, she turns to face Jenner, "What about the person you were speaking with? Vi?"

Jenner looks up, "Vi. Say hello to our guests. Tell them... welcome." Everyone looks surprised as a computer voice responds, "Hello, guests. Welcome." Jenner sighs, "I'm all that's left. Sorry." He turns and takes us into a room where he proceeds to take our blood samples. Andrea goes first, "What's the point? If we were infected, we'd all be running a fever." Jenner looks at her with a blank expression, "I've already broken every rule in the book letting you in here. Let me just at least be thorough." He removes the needle out of her arm, "All done. Who's the next lucky winner." I stand up, "I'll go." He smiles, "Brave. Come claim your seat."

I sit down as he gets the syringe ready. He's about to inject the needle but pauses and says, "You can look away if you need to." I shake my head, "It's no big deal. I love needles. This was always my favorite part when i had to go to the doctors." He looked surprise, "That's a first. Well, all right then." He injects the needle, I watch as my blood starts pouring into the vile. He pulls out the needle and starts to get another syringe ready. "All done, who's next?" I stand up, maybe a little too fast. Next thing I know I'm on the ground. Jenner stands up, "You okay?" I nod my head and close my eyes to stop my head fro spinning. I open them to find Shane picking me off the ground. Jacqui is sitting in front of Jenner and says, "She hasn't eaten in days. None of us have."

After we're all done with the blood samples Jenner takes us into a dining hall and whips us up a wonderful dinner. Everyone is laughing and drinking wine, just having a great time. I look over at Jenner, he's just observing us. I realize that I hadn't thanked him for dinner. My parents had raised me to always say Thank You and to have manners. Of course, I wasn't a perfect child but I knew when I was being rude. I cleared my throat, "Um Dr. Jenner. Thank you so much for allowing us into your facility and for this amazing dinner." Everyone stops and looks over. Rick stands up and says a small toast, followed by everyone saying thank you. I stand up, "You mind if I use the restroom?" Jenner chuckles, "Not at all."

He points me in what direction to go. I stand up and head to the bathroom. I sit and pee, my stomach starts to have cramps. I go to wipe but stop. "It better not be that time..." I proceed to wipe and look down, "Yes!" Clean as a whistle. Nothing better than mother nature not visiting. Once I head out of the bathroom I run into Jenner and the group as they're walking down the hallway. "Oh just in time.." He pauses. I smile and tell him my name, "Ellie." He resumes, "...Ellie. I was just telling your friends that the couches are comfortable, but there are cots in storage if you like. There's a rec room down the hall that you kids might enjoy. Just don't plug in the video games, okay? Or anything that draws power. The same applies-- If you shower, go easy on the hot water." Glenn looks back at us with a huge smile on his face, "Hot water?" I walk over and pick an empty room. I lay on the couch in the room, close my eyes and drift to sleep.

"Ellie wake up." I open my eyes to find Shane on top of me he's kissing down my neck. "WTF, Get off me!" I kick and try to push him off but he's too strong. "What's wrong? I thought you liked me." He teased me as he ran his finger down my stomach to the top of my pants. "Like you? Where in the hell could you have gotten an idea like that?! Get off!!!" I tried kicking him again but it was no use. His expression quickly turned to anger, "So you can fuck Rick but not me? Huh? I already lost Lori. I ain't losing you!" He holds me down and starts aggressively kissing me. "Fuck Rick? I didn't have sex with Rick! And what do you mean lose me, you ain't ever had me! You're drunk get off me!!!!!!! HELP! HELP!" He laughs, "You ain't fooling no one Ellie."

What was happening? I slapped him and bit his arm. He grunted and held the part where I bit him. "You bitch! I'll show you a lesson!" He slapped me and ripped my shirt off. I was screaming at this point, how hadn't anyone heard me yet? "HELP ME! RICK! GLENN! ANYONE, HELP ME!" Shane stopped as the door opened. I sighed as Rick walked in, "Shane what are you doing?" I was so happy and relieved, "Rick. Thank god. Get him off me." Rick completely ignored me as he walked over to Shane, anger in his eyes. He took out a black rag from his back pocket and handed it to Shane, "I told you if you were gonna do this to keep quiet." My mouth dropped open, "Rick... what--why--.." I trailed off as Rick walked over to me tied my hands up and held my head down as Shane put the rag over my mouth so that I couldn't scream. "MMMMM!!!MMMMM!!!" I tried speaking but it was muffled. Shane smiles at Rick and motions to the door, "Alright man, I got this. You can leave now." Rick laughs as he walks out the door.

Shane looks at me, "Where were we?" I looked around for anything to save me but there was nothing I could do. Shane started kissing me and licking in between my chest. He looked into my eyes and caressed my face, "You're gonna be a good one. I can tell." I tried screaming and moving my mouth to try to get the rag off but they had tied it way too tight. What was I going to do? Why would Rick do this?

I squeezed my eyes tight as I feared whatever horrible stuff awaited me.