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Strange!!!
Manik didn't react to whatever I did in the kitchen.
He came and sat next to me and started eating pizza as if nothing happened in the kitchen.
I thought he will come shouting and running towards me and I will tell him to catch me and in the process, I will trip and he will hold me and both of us will fall on the couch. He will come closer towards me. Our hot breaths mingling with each other. He will slowly cover the distance between our lips and our lips will meet.
My bubble broke.
Nothing like that happened.
Or my dirty mind was expecting too much from him.
Arrhhh!!! These hormones.
We both were sitting on the couch eating silently. I looked at him and saw his calm face. It was pissing me off. We finished our dinner silently. Okay, this is enough!!
"What the hell is wrong with you," I asked him in an irritating tone because I wanted him to react to what I did inside the kitchen.
"What did I do." He said casually.
U idiot!!!
Moron!!!
Duffer!!!
"Why aren't you reacting to what I did to you in the kitchen" I reminded him of whatever happened.
"Why? You wanted me to react to it." He asked looking into my eyes.
He is irritating the shit out of me now!
Writers POV
Yes, it is damn pissing off if you do something and that person doesn't even react to it. When you were expecting the opposite reaction from that person to what she reacts to. It drives you crazy.
Do you guys agree or not??
"No no. absolutely not. Why would I want you to react to what happened in the kitchen? Simply for fun, I was reminding you about it. " I said in a sarcastic tone. Isn't it obvious that I wanted him to show some reaction. I thought he will be pissed off.
"Such a jerk you are " saying I throw a cushion on him which landed on his face.
Bingo!! Perfect aim!!
Correct place it landed on!!!
I got up to leave the hall but he pulled me with such a force that I landed on him completely, and within no seconds he pinned me below him.
"Where are you going??" Manik asked seductively tracing his finger from my forehead till my jawline.
"To my room. So leave me." I struggled against his hold.
Though I didn't want him to leave me or get out of his hold but still.
"Don't you want to see my reaction?" He asked huskily.
"No," I said softly trying not to lose myself to his proximity but I failed. He started rubbing his cheek on mine while his hot breaths on my ear were making me insane. I was not able to think properly. I closed my eyes breathing heavily due to the proximity between us.
"Manik" I said in a low voice.
"Hmm.."
He lowered down his head towards my neck. His hot breath on my neck was creating fondness for him inside me. He placed a long wet kiss on my neck making me gasp. I arched my neck more to give him more access to it. My hands reached his tangled hair and pulled him more towards me.
"M...Manik..." I moaned his name and cupped his face to pull him up and kissed his lips passionately. he immediately responded with equal force. We broke the kiss panting heavily. Our breaths mingling with each other. Manik started kissing my neck. Collar bone. Give me love bites. Licking. Kissing it softly. Making me moan his name.
I moved a bit upwards breaking the contact of his lips from my skin as I was not able to take his intense kisses which were doing nothing but passing currents and shivers in my body but manik immediately moved upwards and started kissing my neck again, cupping my face to keep it still.
His kisses were wild and tempting. All I could do is surrender to him and moan his name. I pulled his face and kissed him hungrily and furiously to calm myself down I started rubbing my legs against each other because his intense kisses had already made me wet between my legs.
I put my legs on his waist pulling him more closer to me. We were kissing each other madly as both of us wanted to dominate the kiss.
He pressed his nails on my waist making me gasp. The very next moment his tongue was inside my mouth tasting every inch of my mouth while my hands were roaming all over his back, pushing him more towards me. Pressing our chest against each other.
We broke the kiss and looked into each other's eyes. Calming our heavy breaths.
"Manik thank you for coming into my life and for making it so beautiful," I told him looking into his eyes because I wanted to pour out my feelings to him.
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