Jazmine Lopez is Ray Ray Lopez's little sister. Their parents died a year ago and now Ray is raising Jazmine. But, because Ray likes to party so much, there are many many secrets that Jazmine is keeping from. He thinks he knows her, when in reality...
First things first, please be nice in the comments. I was reading through them, some of the replies that people left to other people were kinda rude. The world needs more positivity, so please be kind. And please don't be rude about my decisions, that I made in my book. I'm not trying to be rude, I truly appreciate you guys' opinions, but to be flat out rude is unexceptionable.
Thank you to everyone who is kind, to others and about my choices. I'm doing shout outs soon, I promise. There may even be a few in this chapter.
Second, thank you, thank you, thank you. This story is back in the fan fiction list at #679. I appreciate that and I appreciate you guys! I'm being serious, thank you so much!
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So, since this story is coming to an end, I will be beginning to edit it very soon. I'm not going to make any major changes in the plot, but I will be making the story much better.
Now for the Q&A, I wanted to answer a few questions that I have seen very often in the comments, or explain things that some of you were upset/confused about.
1. Why didn't I just tell you guys about Kaden?
Kaden was a character that I wasn't really sure about at first, but after I decided that she would be a part of the story, I didn't want to give it all away at first, so I only gave bits of information. I was going to just flat out say it, but realized that wasn't the right approach, and it wasn't very realistic, seeing that Jazmine and Santo were the only two that even knew about her, except for his parents. Also, I didn't decide that she was actually still alive until the chapter that I wrote it, it was not planned at all.
2. Why didn't I just tell y'all what happened between Ray and Jazzy when they had that talk in the beginning of the story?
Honestly, I thought I did, and didn't realize that I forgot to add that in the beginning until y'all commented. I had wrote it in my notes, and emailed to myself to publish because at the time, my computer was broke. I copied and pasted the wrong part, so I completely skipped that on accident, without realizing. I published it later in the story as a flashback, but that was a complete accident as to why it wasn't published when it was supposed to be.
3. My decision that Jazmine was pregnant the second time.
Strictly to add drama to the story, honestly. Some of you didn't like that decision, but it was to make the story more interesting. If Jazmine hadn't gotten pregnant, the story would have been very boring and honestly, it might have ended a long time ago.
4. Why I chose to leave out mature themes?
One, why would I include it? To me, that's gross. I don't want to write that. Also, there is a feature on Wattpad, that tells me what age range the majority of my readers are, and I actually look at the statistics. A lot of my readers are young, including my sister, who reads this book, and all of my other ones. There are a lot of people who don't want to read those type of things, including me, so there will not be any type of mature themes in my stories. Ever. Sorry if that's what you were hoping for, but it's not happening. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just saying.
