(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
Remember flip the tables 1? A rating on a book i have just given up on. I realise that im not cut out for writing novels only short stuff like this. Sadness aside, i have another flip the tables for you. RATE MY OC! (i have 2 ocs actually but im just gonna let y'all rate the more developed one)
After rating her(telling me improvement etc) give me a marysue level rating as well;)
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Eh don't mind my art though
Klaire odair
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Quote: Take note, its klaire with a "k", not "C".
Fullname: klaire o'dair
Pronunciation: clare /o-there
Age: ?
Species: ailen(She doesn't have a human form though the best she can do to look human is to retract her extra arms)
Appearance: she has porcelain unnaturally smooth grey skin(because shes an ailen), cupids-bow shaped lips, boob length pinkish-purple hair. She's 162cm and 58kg. Her body type is pear(wide hips small chest). She has 4 arms but two can be retracted(like a cat's claw) her cheeks have a black streak on each side
Power: telekinesis
Personality:
-laidback
- shy and awkward around guys she likes
- funny
- has a temper (but she can control it)
-defensive and possesive
-stubborn
-spolied
-insercure
-lazy
Likes:
-fruit flavoured jelly
-getting her way
-chaos and drama(secretly)
Dislikes:
-people getting her name wrong
-being ignored
-cheese
-rude people who can't take a joke
-having something/someone she cares about taken away
-not getting what she wants
Combat:
Her powers or a sword
Backstory:
Klaire is the child of the lord asher odair and lady gladys odair who, on the kiyodine, are two capitol soldiers. However, when their daughter was born she did not grow up to be tough and strong like they expected. She ended up being a stubborn,lazy and spoiled brat. One day, lord odair gets a notice from the capitol saying that achiros(their rival planet) is planning on launching attacks on kiyodine(their planet) to try and take over their planet. Lord and lady odair agree that while they have to be on the front lines of this territorial war, klaire must be protected at all cost.
Why? Well she as been living a sheltered life all this while and she'll never be able to take on the hardships of war. So in the end they ended up lying to her by saying she needs to learn better behaviour and sent her to another realm(depends on rp) far away from kiyodine and achiros.
Despite earlier hatred for this new realm she's been sent to, she slowly makes some friends and becomes less of a spoiled brat.
One day she gets a letter from home by her parents, it was a cheery letter addressed to her telling her on how they missed her. However, that letter was a fraud and scribbled on the back of it was written by a guard explaining the truth. Lord odair was killed and lady odair is being held captive by the achirians and the 'cheery' letter was written before the war and instructed to be sent so that klaire wouldn't have to worry. But upon learning the horrible truth, klaire decides to toughen up and train(she was lazy at first) how to fight by her friends. Now, along with her friends she must find a way to go back and free her mother, and avenge her father.
