(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
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From what i read he's sounds like a typical "bad life then something happens to make him cool" but i haven't read the story so who am i to judge but since you're asking me to judge based on this. I will. Either way, in your story give him more character development.
