(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
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So what happens aftet she moved closer? Did she become the newest frisk? Also her dad turned out gay? Why did he marry her mum at first then? Is he bisexual? If he is then staying with her mum would not be an issue. Ahhh this leaves have so many unanswered questions. Fix that. Also i noticed you didn't write about her personality? Fix that too.
