(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
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FINALLY A FANDOM IM IN!! Ok...lets see...
1) well normally, i would go on a longggg rant about how i hate magical number 15. But since most demigods in chb are around 12-19 i guess its acceptable.
2) her looks are fine and so is her godly parent. At least it aint poseidon or one of the big three
3) her likes and dislikes are ok so is her personality
4) hmm her power...isn't the mist something quite powerful? Allowing this young girl(she's just one year older than me) to be able to control it is kind of marysue-ish.
5) well her backstory is a cliche...her step mum and sister died....loke every other oc's. I haven't even seen a demigod oc that parent and step parent isnt dead or abusive -_- and again with the foster homes?? Just because leo valdez is cool doesn't mean everyone should just copy his life story -_-
In conclusion, the backstory is a total cliche but thats just my opinion.you don't have to change it or anything unless you want too though. Just saying....be Original
