(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
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Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
Hello there guys! Im back after a long long while:) Today i will be reviewing/ranting about some percy Jackson ocs Soooo enjoy!!
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Firstly, about her looks. Whats with the multi-coloured dyed hair? Doesn't she know that bright colours may attract monsters??(especially since she's already a zeus child) Next, like is say she's a child of zeus so thats pretty much a cliche because WHY MUST THEY ALWAYS BE A CHILD OF SOMEONE IN THE BIG 3?? ok, so about her proportions. Her waist is a literal triangle. Oh wow. Of courseee this girl must be "hot and skinny" maybe if she were a child of Aphrodite then she COULD look like that...but still. Also, her crop top. Why. Just why is she wearing one? Im pretty sure chiron is not gonna approve of this tiny revealing thing. Oops. About her bio...its ok i guess since theres not much info. But maybe she doesnt need so many weapons??? OK...NEXT!
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Next up, we have severus snape! I mean "adara light" oops my mistake. So anyway, her abilities and weapon are basically a copy of nico's??? Where's the originality? Ya and "3 scars on her arm" are totally "special attributes". ABOUT HER FREAKING PERSONALITY what the actual hell is "realistic"? Is that even a personality?? Nope. Her likes and dislikes are pretty much a stereotypical "creature of the night" thing. (she likes darkness). Overall, she's just kind of a basic oc Look at the pic of snape down below SEE THE RESEMBLANCE??
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^ see?? Told you
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a) They spelled "ares" wrong b) marysue here is "naturally awesome" c) she typically likes people getting hurt (DUH. YOU WOULDN'T BE A ARES CHILD IF YOU DIDN'T *sarcasm*) d) she hates people (ofc she does! Wouldn't be an "emo" oc if she doesnt!) e) i bet her backstory is tragic,dark and overall depressing. Oh joy.
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her name is "art" omg. Why. HER MOTHER IS ATHENA AND FATHER IS APOLLO SO IS THIS IMPLYING THEY SLEPT TOGETHER??? UH JUST NO. NO. Even if so, she would be fully a goddess, not a demigod. Ummm i can barely see anything else in this picture its so blurry so im just gonna stop right here. Its probs gonna be bad anyway
I think I'll end this here. Gotta..go..sterilize myself.
