Hey guys. I'm sorry that I haven't updated since last month. I actually have two versions of chapter forty in progress, I just have no idea which I prefer or not where I want this story to go, or if I like where it's at right now.
So, I was wondering if I could get a little bit of feedback on what you think of my story at the minute because right now I'm kinda down about writing it as a whole.
I feel as though I don't capture the personalities of the characters as well as I used to, I feel like the book is as fun as it used to be, and most of all I feel like Aika has become a character that I didn't want her to become.
Aika wasn't meant to be this dense oblivious Mary Sue, but now she is. I wanted Aika to have more spunk and be exciting and unpredictable, but I never knew how to come up with many situations to help her show that. Now she's just an airhead and I feel like she's a boring character now...
Obviously, I'm not gonna delete the book or drastically change the whole plot (even though there isn't really one 😅) because c'mon 40 chapters is a lot- I'm not just gonna throw that away!
Therefore, Wrong Number may be changing a little bit. Chapters might be edited and some rewritten to make it better. But it depends on if you guys like it how it is now.
Anyway, sorry for going on about how my book is a mess right now haha. I do hope you're enjoying it anyway, and have a good summer break also!
-Becca xx
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Wrong number (ohshc)
Fiksi PenggemarWhat happens to Aika when a wrong number changes everything for her? *cover art belongs to artist I did not draw it. I do not own Ouran High School Host Club or any of the characters except my OC.*
