Payton's point of view
Mandy's wedding was beautiful. Their vows brought tears to my eyes and everyone looked gorgeous. The dance was fun and we all got fucked up. I can't remember most of the night but waking up in a Hawaii with a hangover not fun. I jumped up from the bed and ran to the bathroom. I spent the whole day puking and eating. Brodie and Tyler and Alexander had gone down to play football. Jenna and Kiana were at the pool and Mandy and Josh had left for their honeymoon in Paris. I walked back into the bathroom feeling another wave of sickness.
"Hey P we're back!" I smiled hearing all my friends voices. I quickly brushed my teeth for the hundreth time that day and walked into the living room of the hotel room. Jenna and Tyler and their fiance-ness were cuddled up on the futon and Alex and Kiana were in the kitchen arguing about hockey. No shocker there.
"Hey guys how was your day?" I felt Brodie snake his arms around my waist. I leaned my head back and smiled.
"Go get dressed babydoll, we are going on a date, how's that sound?" I looked at Brodie and he was grinning like and idiot. I looked at Kiana and I swear my jaw had dropped to the floor. There on her finger was a HUGE beautiful sparkling dimond ring. I ran over and grabbed her hand.
"No way! Alex when did you pop the question?!" I was so shocked. Did this happen at the wedding or today? I needed every detail and I needed it now!
"Payton, babe come on you can ask them about it later.. I planned out a whole romantic Hawaii date just for you." I dropped Kiana's hand and ran to the bathroom again. What was so important that Brodie was rushing he never rushed before? I jumped in the shower and washed up quickly. I got out and went into the room. I saw Brodie standing there looking damn fine in a tux.
"Babydoll, you gotta stop looking so damn sexy! Seriously soon I won't be able to control myself and I'll take away your innocence." I blushed and quicklly put on the baby blue floor length dress that was laying neaty on the bed. I did my hair and make up and looked in the mirror. I was so shocked at the reflection.
There standing before my eyes was a beautiful girl, a girl I once believed was broken beyond fixing but next to her was this god- like guy that had changed her forever. The guy that had given her strength and the guy that had broken her heart many times, the guy that she was so in love with.
Brodie lead me down to the lobby and there was a big stretch limo waiting outside. I looked up at Brodie and he just smiled down at me. We drove for about thirty minutes and finally came to a stop. The driver opened the door and I was greeted with the most beautiful sight I had ever seen.
"Brodie this is... gorgeous." I turned and smiled brightly at this wonderful boyfriend of mine. The view of the ocean and sunset was so great, there was a little table for two set up and one candle was lit. Tears welled in my eyes and for once they were tears of happiness. I turned and pulled Brodie in for a long kiss. He was my everything. That sounded really cheezie but it was what I felt.
"Payton how about we go sit down I need to talk to you." I felt my insides twist and turn in anticipation. Was he going to dump me? I nodded and went to sit down. Brodie pulled out my chair and kissed my cheek lightly. All previous thoughts were forgotten. I looked at the view again and knew nothing bad was going to happen.
Brodie handed me a rose and took my hand in his. My heart swelled at all thought and work that must have gone into planning this date. Brodie brought out a picnic basket for under the table and handed me a plate. Surprisingly enough the food was still hot, but everything was delicious. Once we were finished Brodie grabbed my hand and we walked along the edge of the cliff. Yes a cliff Brodie was so cheezie he took me to a cliff and had a romantic date.
We stopped and Brodie looked at me. He held my hand in his and brushed his lips against mine. I grabbed the back of his head and pulled him to me as he tried to pull away. He quickly deepened the kiss and my body came alive. It was like my body was shocked to life. I broke the kiss needing air. I looked into his beautiful eyes and I got lost.
"Payton, I love you so much." I looked at Brodie and just waited for him to start laughing and I will wake up to find everything was just a dream, that I was in a coma and was dreaming... or something.
"Why Brodie why do you love me?" I watched as he got down on his knee and my eyes watered instantly.
"Payton, I love you because you bring out a side in me that I never knew exsisted. You make me a good person, my friends and everyone tell me I have changed completely in a good way. Recently I began to see it myself. Everything is different. I feel the music in a different way, I think about goals and the future more than ever. When we're not together, you're always on my mind. I miss you when you're not around. It's like I feel loved and that's the best feeling ever. I'll never hurt you, I'll love and cherish you for the rest of our lives. I know it's going to be hard. I know we will have our ups and downs especially the first years but I am confident we are good for each other and are meant to be together. You've stolen my heart and now I hope and pray you will let me give you my last name..." I looked at Brodie as a tear fell down his face. I wiped my eyes and wiped that stray tear away.
"Payton Mia Brookes... Will you Marry Me?" I smiled and dropped to my knees my tears of happiness fell to the ground. I looked up at Brodie and launched myself into his arms. I kissed him with so much love and passion.
"Yes, yes, a trillion times yes. I will marry you Brodie Hunters."
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