Stay: A Divergent High School Fan Fiction {SEQUEL}

Chapter 3

I left out a huge breath. Partially out of relief, but mostly out of excitment. We just finished our first real concert of the tour. According to Susan this was one of the smaller crowds. That was hard for me to believe becuase there was over 100 people here. How many did she expect for big shows?

"I knew you could do it." Tobias whispered in my ear when I exited the stage.

"Thank you. I couldnt of done it without you." I replied. I Knew I should be 100% happy with those words, but they were kind of bittersweet. Was that really true? Would I be here still, if I didnt have him? It is true that our relationship, basically started with him saving me.

Since then he's given me strength and courage. But what is we werent together? would I revert to my old ways of baggy clothes, avoiding attention, and possibly even self harm again? 

No. That I would absoultly never do again. no matter what. I know a lot of girls find it romantic to be saved, and be the damsel in distress. And a lot of girls even get so attached to their boyfriends.But the thought that the only reason I can be brave is because of a boy...well It makes me feels weak.

To clarfiy none of this means I dont love Tobias. I do, with all my heart. Im just overthinking everything, as usual.

Thankfully, Im broken out of my thoughts when Christina says " So, how about we invite every youtube group on the tour for a party tonight?

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Guys please dont hate me. I know I havent Updated in  a while, and this is so short.The authors note is probably going to be longer than the chapter.

This chapter is really sucky so I apologize. Its important though, for us to see these types if thoughts from tris. Becasue 1. I see it as a little similar to initiation, and how people would assume her rank is only bc of Tobias. and 2 bc its important for the story. obvi.

 

So I really need you to READ THIS SECTION OF A/N:

So recently I found a divergent high schol fic and starting reading it. And honestly I felt like I was just reading a remake of Play it again I wont say whose story it is, unless this continues.  But I am going to list the biggest details that are the same so hopefully the writer of this story will recognize ths is them and stop. SIMILAR DETAILS INCLUDE:

-The story starts with Tris crying and talking to Christina about Tris' breakup with Al. It is said that Al Cheated on tris, and that Tris only really dated him to get over Four. (Which is verrrry similar)

-The group going to a beach party on the beach hosted by lauren.

- the girls singing "Boy" by Little Mix to tris. Then Tris preforming a song to Al.

-Four catching Tris cutting

-Four comfoting her about it and asking to her out while doing so

-Christina revealing to Four how long Tris has had feelings for him.

Now, I dont know If it was an intentional copy. Buts its literally all the same exact events that take place in my book, only they're written a little differently. To the Author, You should be able to figure out this is you, since I know you read this. If you do realize it, please stop taking my ideas I work really hard to make my fics original.

Thank you.

On  a lighter note, An update for becoming Alyssa Hamilton is coming soon, so please go check that out :)

I promise to get a less sucky update for this soon too.

Ily all, Goodbye for now lovelies.