Correction

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Dear Miss!
A spot you have missed.
Dear me!
Blind you must be.

Just wait!
You falter again.
Just why!
Shoddy that insolent cry.

Please pause!
Incorrect fallacy.
Please hold!
Your mind I scold.

End this!
Not my cup of tea.
End now!
Too tired, can't allow.

But stop!
Where is the praise?
But freeze!
A tiny fraction I surely please?

I see..
Hate not ignored.

I wait..
And blame is grave.

I pause..
You burn away my pride.

I end..
If not I, you will for me.

But now, you will stop.
Correct me if I'm wrong.
But are you a saint,
That's representing God?

Correction; You're not.

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I think it's safe to say that some people like to annoy others and only point out their flaws, when in reality they're no better. Don't let people step all over you, and don't let them judge you. Take others advice, sure, but only you can truly fix yourself.

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