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The Strength Within

Reviewed by: smilesandlullabies

Author: SpellMidnight4515

Cover : 9/10

I can't really fault it, I love the font, and the aesthetic, however I couldn't give this full marks, as I only award full marks to those covers I think are CREATIVE, and yours isn't very creative.

Description/Summary : 10/10

It's strong and powerful. It shows that you have PURPOSE and gives a clear insight to the content of your book.

Chapters Review

One - 10/10

I liked the rhythm of this poem, it flowed and it told a story; it showed development and displayed character growth.

Two - 10/10

This was short and simple and it conveyed a very important message.

Three - 8/10

This was good, however I didn't feel as intrigued by this as I was for the first two poems. It wasn't as gripping or rhythmic.

Four - 10/10

I love how you incorporated a LOT more statistics in this topic, it just accentuated your point even more, and ended this chapter perfectly.

Five - 6/10

This was okay but I felt that it delivered a message you already told in an earlier poem; it felt repeated. It also didn't show much development, it seemed to be a stagnant poem with a sudden change at the end. Also, it just wasn't as good as the other poems, which all had STRONGER content.

Activity of Writer : 5/10

So it is hard to judge activity when a writer hasn't reached an engaging audience just yet, however you do have a FEW comments, and from what I've seen so far, you've only replied to ONE.

Plot : 10/10

I love that you have a sole topic for your book, and that every poem will be related to BULLYING. It's an important and strong topic that you're addressing, and spreading a message in a beautiful way.

Overall Advice :

Not much advice is needed, just focus on your writing, post lots so as to not lose any readers, and ENGAGE with your readers - even if it's just by replying to ONE comment; every comment counts.

Overall Rating : 9/10