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Starfish

Reviewed by: Annie_Moon2001

Author: sandpapertongue

Cover: 3½/10

It doesn't really suit the story. It's a total mismatch. You can keep the fonts since their sizes and styles are okay.

Description/Summary: 9/10

The first sentence there just seems totally off. I noticed some errors here and there. In general, I'll advice you edit the description.

Chapter Review: 8/10

It's a really lovely story. Confusing at first but once you delve into it, it's really worth it. There are a lot of tense shifts and some misspelt words.

Activity of the Writer: 10/10

The writer is really active. Even if there are few comments, the writer always responds.

Plot: 9/10

At first, I thought I was reading a horror story when I read the part were the only surviving son (I think his name is Joey Regent) was gutting a fish trying find a fragment or two of his brothers bone. The book is really interesting.

The only problem is the misspelt words and those tense shifts. Other than that, great job.

I highly recommend this book to all wattpaders.

Any Other Thing:

I read till chapter 4.2 which is currently the last chapter. But, I still don't get how the title of the book, Starfish suits it. Maybe you can change the name or make the remaining chapters describe that name.

Overall Advice:

I'll advice you take your time and edit this book because It's a really lovely story. Take note of those tense shifts and misspelt words.

I'll be giving this book an 8/10.