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The Hero Project

Reviewed by: LadySapphire2018

Author: QueenDarquesse

Cover: 7/10.

I do like the font color and style. It's very easy to read and conveys a sense of urgency. The girl looks very serious and demonstrates a sense of seriousness. I think coloration on the whole leans a bit too dark. The dark background and dark attire of the girl blend together a bit too much, but overall a decent cover.

Description/Summary: 8/10.

It conveys a sense of urgency and intrigue. It also easy to understand what the story is about. An oldie, but a goodie as far as theme goes.

Chapter Review: 9/10

There wasn't really much that needed to be improved. One paragraph was rather long, but the opening chapter explained what was going on clearly. I did like the tie in with the title. Great ending. Well executed with a few very nice descriptions. 

Activity of the Writer: 10/10.

The writer seems very active in their conversation box and seems to reply to readers consistently.

Plot: 9/10

The plot seems to based on classic themes. It was well executed though. 

Any other things:

The author is excellent when it comes to chapter endings. They always leave you wanting more. The emotional and physical descriptions are wonderful. The book thus far leaves quite a bit of mystery as well.

Overall Advise:

This review is based only on the beginning of the story so as to prevent giving out too many spoilers. As I said, I do like the mystery of this book and the descriptions are exceptional. It's based on some fairly common ideas, but very unique in its own way. The only thing I might advise for improvement it to see if they could add a bit more flair to the bus stop chapter. Overall though, I have to give this story a 9/10 thus far and will definitely continue reading on.