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Reviewed by: Annie_Moon2001

Author: taz2327

Cover: 8/10

The cover is okay but I don't think this is the best cover for this book.

Description/Summary: 10/10

I think you should send that first sentence about your book being a rough draft to the bottom. The description is really good. It's really attention grabbing. I can't wait to start reading this book.

Chapter Review: 9/10

The first thing I noticed was that your chapter 1 is at the bottom. The story is really interesting. There was just few errors. Good job.

Activity of the Writer: 9/10

The writer always responds to messages on the conversation box but haven't replied to some messages on the comment box.

Plot: 10/10

This book is really good. The creativity and originality of the book is actually on point. I really love Brooklyn's character.

Overall Advice:

A new cover will be great. I'll advice you edit this book. It doesn't really call for major editing since they're just typos. Also, I believe you should try to reply to all comments.

I'll be giving this book a 10/10.