Reviewed by: _born_sarcastic__
Author: SHEIFREDRICK
Cover: 9/10
It's a really good cover. The minute I, as a reader, look at it, the cover pulls me to read it.
Description/Summary: 8/10
Your description is truly amazing! It intrigues me, and I have to read it right now.
Chapter Review: 8/10
I see that you have posted only one chapter, so I'll review that much. I like your writing style, and I absolutely love your grammar. Only, I saw unnecessary commas here and there (not much, but it was there), which is not quite obvious. I just had to give some critique.
Activity of the writer: 8/10
You are pretty active. I don't see a point in commenting on that:)
Plot: -
I'm not going to rate anything, because there is only the prologue put up, and one chapter cannot decide what the plot is. From what I've gathered you have a pretty interesting plot.
Anything else:
Not really. It's such a good book, keep updating!
Overall: 41/50
Amazing Cover - Check
Cool blurb - Check
Bomb Chapter: Check
I don't see what can go wrong with your book, unless the plot is bad; which I am pretty sure is not. Just update soon!
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