The Cimmerian Knight

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Reviewed by: _born_sarcastic__

Author: SHEIFREDRICK


Cover: 9/10

It's a really good cover. The minute I, as a reader, look at it, the cover pulls me to read it.


Description/Summary: 8/10

Your description is truly amazing! It intrigues me, and I have to read it right now.


Chapter Review: 8/10

I see that you have posted only one chapter, so I'll review that much. I like your writing style, and I absolutely love your grammar. Only, I saw unnecessary commas here and there (not much, but it was there), which is not quite obvious. I just had to give some critique.

Activity of the writer: 8/10

You are pretty active. I don't see a point in commenting on that:)


Plot: -

I'm not going to rate anything, because there is only the prologue put up, and one chapter cannot decide what the plot is. From what I've gathered you have a pretty interesting plot.


Anything else:

Not really. It's such a good book, keep updating!


Overall: 41/50

Amazing Cover - Check

Cool blurb - Check

Bomb Chapter: Check 

I don't see what can go wrong with your book, unless the plot is bad; which I am pretty sure is not. Just update soon!

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