Oh Yeah?! Well Watch Me!! [Undergoing Heavy Editing]

Story Notes

-The character that was set for this story was Clarice Rocha, the way she died was during the time Karz was going to take the stone while everyone was in the cabin, what was originally going to take place was Karz killing her out of rage when he smelled Esididi's blood on her because she assisted Joseph in defeating him

-Originally the character was set to have a colder personality and more violent outbursts until Joseph and Caesar eventually helped soothed her down, I found it interesting at first but then I decided to change it slightly since I didn't really like it after all. And yes, she was also going to have a more emotionless and apathetic approach to a lot of the situations.

-I ended up changing her personality to a fiery temper, but in general, have her be a bit more hesitant to the people and her surroundings due to growing up with a mother that wanted her to stop practicing something she really wanted to learn.

-I was going to put the reader into more situations where her uneasy nature around other women shows due to her own experiences with her own mother until she eventually grew out of that habit, but I decided that Lisa Lisa and Suzie Q were enough examples.

The whole time I wrote this story this song always played for some reason, that and it nearly fit some Battle Tendency themes;

Also here are some old/recent sketches of the OC for this story Clarice;

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Whats that............................???

Wait a minute.......................

......................OH MY GOD!!