Contest #2
(This one will have sentences that actually are a lot more descriptive)
1) I walked inside the stone castle watching as the guards turned their stony faces towards my little body as if it was already shredded into a million pieces and scattered across the old creaky wooden floor beneath their feet.
2) I had many reasons to be afraid right now as I walked though the cold menacing gates of the large stone castle and that I would be slaughtered in.
3) I took a step towards the black metal that marked the end of my freedom, and I watched the guards and tried to read their stony faces but all I saw was hate in those eyes and nothing more.
4) My fate would be decided once I got to the center of the evil stone castle in front of me, with those large towers with dangerous spikes threatening the gods far above our heads, and the spears of the guards with the same evil threat and same shape and for the sake of myself I tried to pry my future off from their stony faces but, of course, they revealed none of the sort.
