Scandalous Affair: Oliver Valdez

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ni WHwarriors

ni WHwarriors

Author: CxlxrGreg
Judge: HannaahWH
Overall Score: [94.8]

-Prologue [20] 20%
Men! THIS AUTHOR AND THE BOOK IS CRAZY! HAHAHAH kudos to the author, the first contestant na binigyan ko ng perfect score sa prologue. I mean, wala akong masabi. The opening and the ending is awesome. Hindi ko naramdaman yung boredom. At isa yun sa nagpaganda ng kwento.

-BookCover [18.5] 20%
The Book Cover is good. Hindi siya mukhang jeje at super design. Medyo masaket lang siya sa mata lalo na pag tinignan sa malayuan, Suggest kong focus karin sa Book cover ng story mo kase isa yun sa mga tinitignan ng mga readers bago basahin.

-Q&A [17.3] 20%
Unang sentence palang ng sagot mo nakuha mo agad atensiyon ko. Sinabe mo dun na "We'll deserve to win" na talaga namang tama. BUT we'all know na lahat kayo deserve manalo, what our point is you need to persuade me na dapat IKAW yung manalo kahit lahat kayo deserving. Skip the humble instead show the confident. Get my point? but overall, your answer is nice.

-Plot [39] 40%
You're Good. Sobrang pinahanga mo ako. Simulan na tin sa characters, I like how you gave life to the characters, at first akala ko talaga lalake yung character hahah 'Leberty kings' kase lakas maka lalake nung apelyedo Hahaha akala ko kase hindi siya apelyedo nung una kaya takang taka pa ko pero buti nalang ay na gets korin.

Next is the uniquness. Yung story mo bihira lang makita, lalo na yung plot ng story mo. Kakaiba talaga siya at interesting. Hindi ko alam kung pano mo naisip yun. Pwede pabatok? masiyado siyang nakakilig at nakakatuwa! kaya sana wag kang magsawa sa huli. The scores is almost perfect may mga grammar kalang na namamali pero that's fine naayus naman yan diba? ang mahalaga you have a talent and potential in terms of writing! keep it up love!

-Admin Hannah

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡