WHriters Award [Closed]

The Seven Guardians

Author: deepthinker1D
Judge: KiyoshiWH
Overall Score: [93]

-Prologue [19] 20%
Kuys, kahit common yung story hindi moko binigo. Wala kang prologue kaya binase ko nalang sa discription ng story mo. Interesting siyang basahin kase ako mahilig ako sa mga adventure.

-BookCover [20] 20%
Yung Book cover mo lakas maka fantasy talaga, para siyang castle ng Hogwarts tiyaka yung sa Dark tower ni Stephen King kung nabasa mo man yun HHAHAHAHA gusto gusto ko siya kase lakas maka hatak ng readers. Yung Color, yung Font medyo malaki at kakaiba pero bumagay naman♡

-Q&A [16] 20%
Suggest kolang na wag mong iisipin at i-expect na hindi ka mananalo. You're hoping pero dapat maging confident ka sa work mo kase masterpiece yan, pinagpaguran mo't pinagisipan ng mabuti. Magaling kang manunulat kayaa ipagpatuloy molang yan.

-Plot [38] 40%

-Plot [37.5] 40%
Your plot is beatiful! tottaly! Yung transition ng story tama lang, I like your characters lalo na kung paano mo sila binuhay gamit ang pagsusulat mo, kahit nahirapan ako i pronounce yung mga name nila kuys hahaha ang cute parin kase napaka unique basahin, lalo na yung Aeglo bayun? hala nakalimutan ko hahah ambot. In terms of grammar wala naman akong napapansing mali kase hindi rin naman ako kagalingan rin gumawa ng English sentences, Hindi siya boring at nakaka enjoy basahin kuys♡ keep it up im so proud of you!

-Admin Kiyoshi

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡