WHriters Award [Closed]

Keeping the keepers

Authors: Arvegres
Judge: HannaahWH
Overall Score: [79.5]

-Prologue [17] 20%
The prologue should be used to give readers extra information that advances the plot. It is included in the front matter and for a good reason, Authors use them for various purposes, including: Giving background information about the story. Pero sa sobrang haba ng prologue parang ginawa mo nayung chapter 1, siguro isa yun sa napansin korin. If you wanted to change it, you can, i just wanted to suggest you na wag mo masyadong habaang at gawing parang chapter 1 yung prologue.

-Bookcover [15] 20%
The Book cover is simple, naganda naman siya pero siguro medyo malake yung font or yung pagkakasulat ng tittle, Nagigibg dating kase nun parang sinasakop na niya yung buong cover. But overall, the background color and the style is cute! keep it up♡

-Q&A [10] 20%
Your answer is so short, i mean there's nothing wrong with a short answer ang mahalaga is the content. Pero yung nilagay molang duon is if im not mistaken, correct me if im wrong it's "Kase pinag hirapan ko ito." we'all know us a writer and reader that writing a novel is difficult and wasn't easy. Paghihirapan at paghihirapan talaga. It's so obvious. Hindi mo pwedeng sabihing pinaghirapan mo lang yun. Para maintindihan mo yung pinopoint ko bigyan jita ng example. Kunwari may client kang milionarya, maraming naghahabol sa kaniya pero ikaw una niyang kinonsulta, Kailangan mong mapaniwalang mas magaling ka kumpara sa mga naghahabol sa kaniya then tinanong niya kung baket kailangan ikaw yung pakinggan ko, imagine sasagutin mo siya ng 'kase karapat dapat ako' kase 'pinaghirapan ko yung ipe-present kong proposal' sa tinggin mo makukuha mo kaya yung yes niya?

-Plot [37.5] 40%
Your plot is beatiful! tottaly! Yung transition ng story tama lang, I like your characters lalo na kung paano mo sila binuhay gamit ang pagsusulat mo, I like their chemistry, kahit medyo ang hirap basahin ng pangalan ng iba mong characters ang cute parin kase ang napaka unique basahin, lalo na yung kalawakan. In terms of grammar wala naman akong napapansing mali kase hindi rin naman ako kagalingan rin gumawa ng English sentences, Hindi siya boring at nakaka enjoy basahin♡ keep it up im so proud of you!

-Admin Hannah

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡