WHriters Award [Closed]

A yellow flower with a red tip

Author: Simplicityiscute
Judge: HL_Queen
Overall Score: [90.5]

-Prologue [16.5] 20%
(binase ko nalang sa summary and description) Madaming grammatical erros na pwedeng pwedeng ayusin. Maari din na huwag muna sana idinescribe ang characters para may suspense pati na rin yong fact na twins sila you can describe them as twins without mentioning the word 'twin' for example: 'two alike faces etc etc' madali lang maayos yan suggest kong paglaanan mo ng time wag kang maghinayang sa oras kase worth it naman siyang ayusin♡

-Book Cover [20] 20%
Halatang nag-effort at hindi kuha lang sa pinterest, halatang inedit pa 'to, also sa fonts maganda ang pagpili. Yung color and background tang tama lang, Good yan para makahatak ka pa lalo ng readers kase duon sila madalas mag base, sa book cover.

-Q&A [20] 20%
Very encouraging ang answer. Good sport at hindi binabase ang storya sa dami ng nakukuha nito at tumatanggap ng critics from others. Tandaan na critics are ways to improve your story, it doesn't mean na pangit ito. Very powerful! A big hand for you ghourl♡

-Plot [34] 40%
Maayos ang plot very creative sa paglagay ng 'twins' at characters, medyo unpredictable rin ang mga pangyayari pero yung napansin kolang kaya 34 yung score is very common ang description nilang dalawa, suggest kong lagyan mo ng bagong timpla para hindi siya magmukhang common.

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡