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ni WHwarriors

ni WHwarriors

Author: @Pinkishh_Gray
Judge: HL_Queen
Overall Score: [88]

-Prologue [15] 20%
Need ng revision for typing errors. Mas malinis rin kung aayusin by putting correct punctuation marks. Maganda ang way ng pagsingit sa 'past' pati na rin yong last sentence. Need lang ng improvement sa way ng pagsulat. Maayus mo pa bayan ghourl♡ laban lang

-Book Cover [20] 20%
Very minimal, maganda ang pagpili sa cover at nababasa ng clear ang title. Lakas maka hatak ng readers na talaga namang makatutulong sa story mo. Hindi siya over kase simple lang kaya masarap sa mata. Goodjob!

-Q&A [19] 20%
I can see your dedication in promoting your story and your want for it to grow, lahat tayo dumadaan diyan. I appreciate your effort but always remember that a book's worth is not always about how high and how many it's votes and reads are, the impact is also important.

-Plot [34] 40%
Simple lang ang plot, pero very creative ang way ng pagkabuhay nito. Makikita rin ang pag grow ng characters. Sa Epilogue, maganda ang pag end ng story. Siguro hinihintay kolang yung impact saken as a reader, Kase mas magandang wakasan mo siya ng may impact para mahalin talaga nung readers yung story mo. Suggest kong gawin mo yun but over all your story is so powerful and beautiful! keep it up ghourl♡

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡