Bananas and Pajamas

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ni WHwarriors

ni WHwarriors

Author: IsabellaLlantino
Judge: HL_Queen
Overall Score: [87.5]

Prologue-19%
Malinis ang pag-Ingles kaso masyado ng common ang “gang” term at “mission” Mas mapapaakit ka ng readers kung ibahin mo ng kaunti dahil “taming the bad boy” is not new anymore and has been used a lot. The last sentence though can serve as a start of a “creative” plot.

Book Cover- 15%
Masyadong simple. Hindi kaakit akit. Pwede mo pa itong iimprove by using the correct picture na malaki ang connect ang sa title. Pati na rin sa fonts hindi to gaano mabasa, hindi siya appealing.

Q and A-18.5%
Consistent ang pag susulat niya, doesn’t make her parents a barrier. Confidence is one of the keys of being successful kaya always claim it. Matalo ka man dito, lagi mong isipin na sa sarili mo panalo ka. You just need to improve more.

Plot-35%
Common na ang school plot kaya sana huwag rin common ang scenarios make it unique and better yong tipong hindi pa nakikita sa ibang stories!

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡