Unsaid Feelings

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ni WHwarriors

ni WHwarriors

Author: ginoongjoselito
Judge: HannaahWH
Overall Score: [95.5]

-Prologue [19] 20%
Your Prologue is so painful! Grabe, Nasaktan ako kahit ang common na nung Bestfriend to Besfriend feelings, Anlakas ng impact nung prologue. Na goose bumps ako lalo na yung pinaka last sentence. Nakalimutan ko yung line pero sobranf powerful nun na nagpa isip saken na, "Ahh kailangan ko tapusin to hanggang dulo."

-Bookcover [20] 20%
If im not mistaken, Ikaw yung unang binigyan ko ng perfect score Book cover. Sobrang cute ng cover mo! The color, the fonts and the background is perfect kaya deserve mo din naman bigyang ng perfect score.

-Q&A [18.5] 20%
feel bad for the score. But mayroon kase akong hinahanap na innovative answer. It's very common na sasabihin molang na 'Pinaghirapan mo yung work mk' and 'It's my own work' because we'all know na halos lahat ng story pinaghirapan. As a contestant you need to pursuade me that you're the champion with innovative answer, i know you can do better than that darlin'. But overall i like the confidence of you, the way you answered the question is so powerful.

-Plot [38] 40%
Your plot is beatiful! tottaly! Yung transition ng story tama lang, I like your characters lalo na kung paano mo sila binuhay gamit ang pagsusulat mo, I like their chemistry, kahit medyo ang common na yung content ng story mo, hindi siya nakakasawang paulit-ulitin. In terms of grammar wala naman akong napapansing mali kase hindi rin naman ako kagalingan rin gumawa ng English sentences, Hindi siya boring at nakaka enjoy basahin♡ keep it up im so proud of you!

-Admin Hannah

📎Critique is a somewhat formal word that typically refers to a careful judgment in which someone gives an opinion about something. AS YOUR ATE AND KUYA and AS AN ADMIN binigay lang namin ang OPINYON namin at SUGGESTION para story niyo, wag sana kayong magtanim ng sama ng loob dahil it was just our opinion. LAGI MONG TATANDAAN NA YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! WE'ALL THE ADMINS ARE PROUD OF YOU kase nakasali ka saamen at sa awards na ito! wag kang matakot magsulat ng marami pang work ha! YOU'RE A STAR BABY! SHINE♡