No comment today. Nothing new happening except for the fact that I got a second submission for the Cover Contest. That's gonna go on until mid-March by the way.
Also, 3k. Yay!
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- The OC gets pulled into the Naruto world, and the first thing they do is preform a forbidden ninjutsu that's derived from a nature transformation that's been banned from the universe.
Like really? Never even used chakra and your just like "Shadow Emersion! Concealment of 10,000 Suns!"
*Room turns into hell*
"HOW DID YOU LEARN THAT?! IT'S AN S-RANK FORBIDDEN NINJUTSU!!"
"Oh, it just popped into my head."
- The OC is a vampire-ninja yet has no vampire weaknesses.
Except for, you guessed it, craving blood.
ONLY WHEN IT'S CONVENIENT!
- The OC has the ability to fly.
This is just... Ugh.
It's really only justified if you have a cursed mark or particle style. (as someone recently brought up)
- The OC is one of Orochimaru's escaped experiments and uses that to justify all of their abilities.
Wouldn't Orochimaru have switched into your body by now if you had Wood Style, a Tailed Beast, a Cursed Mark, all 5 Chakra Natures, and a cute face?!
Missed opportunity. That's a damn shame.
- The OC was experimented on by Orochimaru, but they're never affected by his presence.
"O... O-Orochimaru!" She yelled as she threw a spray of kunai perfectly at an enemy.
"I'm so scared..." She thought sincerely as her body stood firm and fired a barrage of lasers at the nearby Genin.
- The OC goes from being shy to having burning hot sex with another character with absolutely no relationship progression.
...
Erm...
PG-13?
- The OC "makes" a song for the canon character in the name of romance.
Inb4lawsuit
- The OC passes the time by training, but they never learn anything in the process.
I decided to pass the time by learning a new Jutsu.
"Let's see, what would Kakashi Sensei say?"
"You lack skill as a ninja and are hereby sent back to the academy."
- The OC is part Neko, yet they don't have any relationship to cats in the entire story.
Ordinary: I have a tail, I have cat ears... That's it.
Extraordinary: I have a tail and night vision Jutsu and claw weapons and the ability to speak to animals and an irrational fear of dogs and a cat eye Dojutsu and I'm part of a cat clan that has cat summons!
- The OC proves that they lack any redeeming qualities as a ninja but gets to graduate on the first day.
Jesus didn't even rise till the third day.
Edited: August 2016
