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TITLE
Absolutely perfect. It suits the story in the most beautiful way possible. You hit the arrow at the centre for this one.
BLURB
Magnificent! It had just the right amount of information to lure a reader in. No spoilers at all! I, however, recommend increasing the number of tags in the story. Usually, a story is featured when it starts climbing the ranks, and since there can be at least 25 tags, better add more!
COVER
It's so pretty. It literally resembles a very pretty portrait. The calligraphy used for writing the title is fantastic! The title and the author's name is clearly visible, so good job on that!
PLOT AND GRAMMAR
A girl who can paint? Animated objects? Mysterious housekeepers? It's fabulous.
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Truthfully, it was one of the most polished books I have ever read.
I did not come across any errors in the book.
It was wonderful to see how every moment was described and the paragraphs were strung with very beautiful words.
It was nice to read about the house. It was personified and not treated like an inanimate object.
The movements of the characters according to different situations and environments was elaborated in the most wonderful way possible.
Each chapter even had the right limit of words per chapter.
OVERALL
When you complete this book, publish it. It definitely is one of the most beautiful stories in paranormal romance. I strongly suggest signing up for book clubs, so that a lot of people can come across this treasure.
