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TITLE
Perfect! Really love the irony between the title and how much Melanie dislikes the label as the servant's daughter on her. I think that was a perfect aim for the arrow.
BLURB
Another marvellous summary! It was exciting and thrilling. Had the hook on the first line itself. There were no spoilers in the story, and it was the perfect trailer for the book!
COVER
Spectacular! I believe that the library is literally one of the best places on earth. One of the main things that lure me into this book is the guy having his own mini-library filled with genres of the forbidden erotic pleasures, and I am not lying, my heart literally did a few somersaults while I was reading the story.
PLOT
This book has me begging on my knees for more.
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I honestly couldn't find a single error to pin-point at. I know am supposed to be giving constructive criticism regarding your book, but I am literally acting like a fan-girl at the moment.
This book deserves so much more attention! Our young Master needs to be shown more spotlight to the people on this orange platform. I really love how flawlessly the book has been built.
My favourite part was when he just showed his mini-library to her and I think I almost got a heart attack at every moment they were having a make-out session when she read all those sexy lines.
There were no grammatical errors. The book was written like it had been edited a million times over. There were the right amount of lines for each paragraph.
It didn't feel like information dumping. The length of the chapters was pretty awesome! It's neither too short nor too long. The plot doesn't feel like it's rushed, it's just perfect!
OVERALL
They say that the first few chapters are one of the most important ones since it decides whether the reader will want to move or not and I think you did a really good job at it! I know the book is going to be fire. Have you thought of publishing your book? I'd really love to order a hardcopy for sure!
Good luck with your projects and keep writing! annabellacx ♥
