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TITLE
It just fits so well! I cannot think of a more appropriate title and it is such a popular catchphrase in the Disney world. 10/10
BLURB
Your blurb is pretty nice. However, remember that a blurb is supposed to be short and sweet. Try something like this.
Olive smith, 17, has her entire life altered when two incredibly attractive guys fall in love with her; the popular jock James Anderson and the bad boy, Nick Miller. Whom does she pick and are hearts going to be split?
Of course she picks her own heart to save! Utilizing people and abandoning them as she pleases. But she's been forgiven because she's the main character.
And why do I have a problem with a teenage high school cliche book? Because I am magically trapped into this new world.
Hi. My name is Zee Thompson and in Disney's words, I am trapped in a new world.
COVER
I love the choice of colour for this book. Her name screams a purple aesthetic too. The author's name and the title are clearly seen and I love the characters on the book too. So good job on that!
PLOT
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I am just reading this book as a reader now, not a reviewer.
If there's any piece of advice that I need to give, it's only to split the chapters into multiple chapters. Your length for each chapter is approximately 15 minutes. Remember that Wattpad works with an algorithm.
So more chapters = more votes = higher ranking = more exposure of your content.
Other than that, it's actually a pretty nice book. I am so glad I didn't skip the prologue, it was lovely to see a twist in a very common trope that a lot of readers use. I wonder how things will turn out between Zee and Nick and it's nice getting the multiple POVs.
OVERALL
It was a pretty refreshing book to read. I couldn't find errors so it feels like I am reading a well polished book. I'd suggest joining book clubs so your book can get more exposure, it feels like reading an underrated masterpiece.
