Markus was sure that something was now going on here. Two people with the exact same name? What are the odds? This has to be an absolute coincidence. There is no way that two people have the same exact name. [Markus is surprised that somebody with the same name exists.] 60
Markus glared at Ryker. "I think I know what might be happening."
"What would that be?" Ryker snarled.
"Well, we might have proof of alternate dimensions. Do we not?" Markus responded coolly. [In his universe, the world ended for him when he was in first grade. How does he know this?] 61
Ryker sighed, "Well then. We have an option, we could go investigate."
The rest of his team came out of the bushes. Lennox gripping a pistol, ready to shoot. Markus noticed more people coming through on the other side. [Everybody comes out of their hiding space with no verbal command. Unless Markus unlocked telepathy, they would be idiots for doing this.] 62
Ryker immediately let the two people on the floor get up. Markus stared at Ryker as he stood in between both of the groups.
"We don't need to fight." Ryker said calmly. [Says the person insulting other people a minute ago.] 63
"I don't care about your opinion, non-survivor!" Lancelot shouted. [You're all survivors, what the fuck do you mean? He wasn't even in earshot of Markus talking about alternate dimensions. Even if he was, they haven't proven anything yet!] 64
Ryker shifted his staff to a very intimidating position. Mostly likely to stun anybody he needs to stun. Or bind, something like that. [Intimidating position is intimidating?] 65
"Nobody is going to fight until I know exactly what is going on here. Do you understand?" Ryker glared at everybody from both sides. [He's in a fighting stance. Hypocrite.] 66
"We might even become good friends, is that right Spark?" [Didn't they literally attempt to kill him a few chapters ago?] 67
A tall looking fox with wings draping over it's sides landed next to Ryker. A little bit more intimidating, I wonder what the other group thinks. [Description 100.] 68
"Who are you guys?" Markus said calmly. [Why is this said calmly?] 69 (nice)
"My name is Lancelot." A younger person said, possibly in his 10's like he was.
"Interesting..." Markus paused, looking at each and every one of them. Sudden realization hit him. "You guys have the exact names that my group does! Something is very odd about this, maybe we should get to know each other like Ryker said." [Person who just got the shit beat out of him wants to become friends with the guy who did the shit beating.] 70
"His name is Ryker?" Lennox said. [Ryker.] 71
"Mhm." Markus replied.
"With his fox with wings pet named 'Spark'." Lennox added. [This gave Jumpy a stroke.] 72
"It's a Winged Fox. He's very interesting." Ryker replied friendly. [No, he isn't, and I created him. That's disappointing.] 73
The groups slowly started to mingle with each other. [These people make friends as easily as five-year-olds.] 74
"Well." Markus spotted Lennox approaching him, "I think we've come up with an idea. We'll leave and let you guys go on your own." [Alright friends I've survived with and known for years and have earned the trust of, I am going to now abandon you for two guys who beat the shit out of me that I just met two minutes ago and go on an adventure, goodbye!] 75
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