[First off, sins just for the fucking title. 5 of 'em too.] 97
Cassian never thought he would see his home again. Now here they where! Although, it could be him hallucinating, yet again, Ryker would've said it was his home, and they wouldn't have been confused. [It's been at most an hour since you left.] 98
As the winged fox soared high above the ground, as they wind whipped past him, he noticed something he wish he didn't. A fire wolf, far below them, leaving a trail of burnt grass and shrubs behind it. [Why are the fire wolves still alive?] 99
The Dragon Kingdom was definitely trying to kill the Lion Kingdom. Something he couldn't permit, as they flew further and further away from the wolf. Making it become only a dot of burning flames.
Cassian noticed that Ryker was close to landing at his home kingdom. Which was good for him, most likely bad for them. [You just went over the border. How are you close already?] 100
Ryker landed his winged fox stealthily and softly. He was now directly outside of his home Kingdom. How could he possibly convince his king to kill Ryker, but not Markus? [Uh, it came from the sky, how do you stealth that? Also, why does he want his king to kill Ryker, and suddenly care about Markus?] 101
Although, Ryker seems to be a very nice person. Maybe I should convince him to spare Ryker. Or...he could just let Ryker die. [Make up your fucking mind.] 102
He's not really sure of which would be better, which would be nicer, or anything like that. Maybe though...they could both live. [Which both exactly?] 103
He had to decide now, they had just entered the gates. His king glowered directly at Markus and Ryker.
"Your Majesty, these are my friends, Markus and Ryker." Cassian stated as he unfolded him arm gracefully while opening his hand to point to them. ["Him arm"] 104
"Well then, Cassian, I hope to see they are successful. As long as they can help us."
Markus stepped forward, "And what would that be?"
"Help us in our war, and we won't punish you."
Ryker eyed the king warily, "Who will we be fighting?"
"The Dragon Kingdom." [They agree to this. And that's fucking stupid. The king doesn't even react to Ryker and Markus looking completely different and advanced. And that's also very fucking stupid.] 120
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Cassian gripped tightly onto the fur of the winged fox. This was the problem with sitting at the very edge, 1000 Meters into the sky, flying at 100 MPH, with certain death below him. [Uh, if you're moving 100 MPH, wouldn't you just fall off?] 121
They were headed to the Dragon Kingdom. [Why can't they just go somewhere else? It's not like the king is spying on them or anything.] 122
Cassian watched as the grass blew by him, noting nothing that he would normally see. [Godzilla had a fucking stroke and died reading this.] 123
"We should be there...by nightfall." Cassian heard Ryker state.
"It's dawn!"
"I know, just, try not to die." [This is somehow relevant.] 124
"Thanks...like that's gonna help out." [Markus would be good at writing sins.] 125
"You should at least be hopeful we'll get somewhere by nightfall." [I- what-] 126
"I don't wanna sit here all day!" [Same.] 127
"We'll be taking breaks, Markus, chill."
"Fine."
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