"Ow!" Varrius fell to the ground after a loud shattering bang. Ryker had immediately shot a ball of flame at the attacker, and was now attacking him. Soon, the entire place was enveloped in fighting. [Ah yes, the attacker who was now attacking him.] 601
Markus unsheathed his gun, Xara was quicker. Xara pulled the trigger and sent a bullet right into Markus's chest. Markus fell over in pain, but it was faint. His adrenaline spiked inside of him. Markus stood up, and charged at Xara. [Markus: the second quickest hand in the east.] 602
Markus hit Xara with her own Hatchet, leaving a deep scar in her arm. Xara grabbed the hatchet and struck back. Xara thankfully missed, Markus stepped back and jabbed forward with his knife. [Markus hit Xara with the hatchet that, from what we know, she was still holding.] 603
Which she grabbed and took into her own hand, Xara stabbed right into Markus's chest. Markus stepped back, he picked up a brick and threw it at Xara. The brick hit Xara right in the chest, although Xara showed no sing of pain. [Plot convenient brick. Xara being buff. "No sing of pain".] 606
Xara approached Markus menacingly, show no sign of mercy in her eyes. Other Lennox attempted to save Markus, although Xara sidekicked him in the chest. Sending him to the floor, Xara pulled out her pistol and shot him twice in the head. [Cool death when you imagine. Not so cool in this method of writing.] 607
Xara shot Cassian from his home in the head as well, just as Xara was about to shoot Markus, the gun clicked. Xara tossed it away, in the same instance, Markus picked up a shotgun and fired at Xara. [Either Xara shot a corpse, Cassian stitched his head together and came back to life, OR Xara killed a protagonist. Plot convenient shotgun.] 608
Xara's leg collapsed, only for her to slowly stand up. Xara pulled out the sword from her back, dropped his knife onto the ground. [At the range they were at, firing a shotgun at Xara would turn her body into swiss cheese.] 609
Markus noticed Ryker about to stab his attacker right in the head. Markus focused back on Xara, who was now glowering at him. [Why would you look at something else, not the person actively trying to kill you?] 610
Just then, an axe landed right beside Markus. Xara faced the person who attempted to kill her. Varrius was standing up and glaring at Xara. [Who Varrius?] 611
Markus realized what he could do, Markus picked up the axe, and stood up. Markus moved toward Xara, Markus raised his axe. Only for Xara to turn around and dodge his strike. [Wasn't Xara standing above Markus?] 612
Xara stabbed him in the side of the chest, in which Xara tripped him. [That stab would've punctured a lung.] 613
Markus grabbed her sword and managed to get it for himself. Markus attempted to take off Xara's arm, only for her to leave her leg exposed. [Sword was mentioned earlier, but we didn't sin it earlier, so now we will. Plot convenient sword.] 614
Markus stabbed her in the leg and shoved it into her leg. Markus stepped back, Xara's leg collapsed. Worst, she was now next to the shotgun. [Xara is now a cripple.] 615
Xara picked it up and fired at him. A bullet penetrated his arm, leaving it in severe pain. Xara fired another shot. Only, she missed this time. The gun clicked, again, she was out of ammo. [How does one miss with a FUCKING SHOTGUN?] 618
Markus limped toward Xara, and kicked the sword in her leg. Putting her off balance, Markus went to pick up a nearby pistol. Only to get stabbed in the back. Markus collapsed to the ground, falling on the hard concrete. [Why would Markus kick the sword in Xara's leg, since when did he have an injured leg and confirmed punctured lungs.] 620
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