[Xara = dead.] 727
Cassian stared off at the rising sun. The sound of the airship's engines blasting in his ears. His sword firmly in place on a holster.
"Are you sure she's even along the river?" Cassian asked Ryker, who was flying next to them on his winged fox.
"Xara has not much else to go. Either it's here, or in more vulnerable areas." Ryker responded. [Grammar pt. 2 electric boogaloo. How do they know Xara is still alive? And, how would she even be alive? She was blown up and crippled.] 731
"Hm." Cassian went back to studying the map, there should be a base coming up not to far from here. A military base to be more exact.
"Any signs of Lurkers down below or any form of life?" Markus yelled over to Ryker.
"I can't spot anything, nor can Spark. So far, I reckon we may be clear for as long as the river can take us." Ryker responded.
Markus nodded, grabbing his AK-47. The airship slowly began getting closer to the tips of the trees. Making them more vulnerable to enemy gunfire.
The stone base wasn't to far down the river, closest on the Western side of them. Even though they decided to check the Eastern side just in case Xara had decided to hide there instead.
"Drop point is here." The pilot announced.
Markus nodded, leaping down to the forest ground. Ryker landed his Winged Fox on the ground. Hopping off, Cassian leaped down as well. Landing not to far from Markus. They grouped up, and went across the river to the Western side. [Don't think they had parachutes or any way of safely dropping to the ground.] 732
The base loomed in front of them, Markus went first, entering with AK-47 downsights. Cassian went in second, Ryker last. Cassian heard the door close behind him as Ryker entered. [Entering with AK-47 downsights. He wasn't aiming down sights, he had the Ak-47 down sights.] 733
They didn't have their groups to protect them now, this was Independent. They had to rely on themselves, hoping that they would be able to fight off Xara whenever she showed herself.
The reached a main area, where the roof didn't exist. A ledge and a few windows where in the half structured building. Most likely destroyed in a fight. [Mfw roof doesn't exist.]
A person stood on the edge, staring out into the trees.
"Make sure you get these back to the Base around Econ Lake. Xara will be happy to finally have them there." The leader of the group said. [Going to say it again: how is Xara still alive? She was blown to pieces.] 734
The people carrying supplies start walking toward the door.
Ryker immediately darted off to hide in a good position. Cassian went to slide into a corner with some boxes. He peered out, people where leaving to put supplies on something.
The leader of the Supply Rendezvous closed the doors.
Once it was clear, they left their hiding spaces.
Ryker opened the door, just as they looked down, a truck was coming from one end.
Ryker signaled for Spark to follow quietly and non-suspiciously. [These last four sentences could've been put together in a paragraph, not split up like this.] 735
In that same instance, they all jumped down and onto the roof of the truck. Being as quiet as they could. [World's Rising: The Drug Bust] 736
This would take them to Econ Lake.
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