The first couple chapters might not be written well, but it does get better as the book goes on.
I've edited most again.
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Stared: April 9th, 2022
Finished: May 22nd, 2023
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3rd person POV:
Z checked outside every time he heard noise in the house next to his as he was waiting for someone to come. But every time he was met with disappointment. There was no one. No one come back. Or not yet? He hasn't lost hope yet because they promised, promised to each other that they'll see each other again.
They were kids when they met, teenagers when they fell in love and adults when they got separated. The only thing left was their promise. That pinky promise they made behind the school building when they were in their last year of high-school. Promise they carried in their hearts until present day.
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Z today was out for grocery shopping, and he also ran out of ingredients at home. Walking through the city and getting inside shops he was carefully choosing what to buy as always.
At that time, a man showed up in front of his house. He knocked on the door but there was no one to answer it. Z wasn't home. The man getting himself a note and a pencil and before he wrote something, he picked up a rose from the house next to Z and left it along with the note that had written something on it. As he was leaving the place he took one last glance and hurried to turn around because if he glanced even a bit more he was afraid he was going to break down in tears.
Don't wait for me anymore Z, I'm getting married. - Aaron T,
