(Now here, the main issue I have is with Nino. If you recall or forgot, Nino got suspicious that Alya is in love with Cat Noir. He gets so suspicious that he starts to spy on her, and push boundaries. That is pretty messed up, and the fact he didn't get punished makes it worse. I do think Rocketear is pretty ok, mostly because of Adrien finding the truth about Rena Rouge and Carapace knowing their identities. It really adds to the shock of Ladybug breaking the rules. So this will work like Miracular and Mr. Pigeon 72, where only a few scenes get fixed. With all that out of the way, please enjoy).
For some reason, dinosaurs have been resurrected, and are causing havoc in Paris. Mostly the Football stadium. Cat Noir and Carapace are trying to hold these beast off, until Ladybug arrives. Carapace traps them inside of a shield, and Ladybug arrives with the doctor responsible for this. The dinosaurs break free, but thanks to a special dino whistle, she manages to tame them. With the dinosaurs done, the day is saved. However, Carapace feels a bit sad, but he says he is ok. As the three heroes leaves, Rena Rouge was spying on them(It is Rena Furtive in the original episode, but I changed it back to Rena Rouge. The reason will be explained in a second). Ladybug gets back the Turtle miraculous, and Nino expresses concern on why Rena Rouge didn't show up. Ladybug says that he was needed, and not her, and she leaves(Here is the first rewrite portion of this episode).
Ladybug goes into a sewer, and makes sure the coast is clear. She does a special knock the walls of the sewer, and Rena Rouge shows up. "The mission is completed. Any sign of Shadowmoth?" Ladybug asked. "Nope, not at all. Just another perfectly safe day at work." Rena Rouge replied(Now the real reason why I kept Alya as Rena Rouge, and not Rena Furtive, is because of two reasons. One, I like Rouge's design better than Furtive's, and two, this creates a pole hole that really didn't bother me much. From what I understand, a miraculous holder can change their appearance if they want to. So, that is a perfect solution if their identities get revealed. Therefore, big plot hole. I decided to not let that be the case because fun fact, I like all of Ladybug's team superhero designs. Some are not great, but ones I wouldn't say are bad. But that is just my taste. And yes, that also means there will be no Cat Walker in my Kuro Neko rewrite). "Great." Ladybug said. The two girls transform back. "Hey, Marinette. Is Nino ok with me not being here today? He looked concerned after that battle?" Alya asked. "Well.........he did ask me why you weren't here, and I told him you weren't needed." Marinette replied. "So he is worried." Alya said. "What do you mean by worried?" Marinette asked. "The truth is he has been asking me why I haven't been showing up for the last two weeks. I keep telling him Ladybug will choose me eventually, so hearing him say that to you makes me bad for him." Alya replied. "Alya, you know why this is happening. Shadowmoth found out your identity, and almost killed your entire family. And as I said, if that ever happens, then I cannot give them a miraculous again. He even heard you say it." Marinette said. "I know, I know. But, maybe he should know the truth. We never keep secrets from each other, and it tears me apart thinking that I have to lie to him." Alya suggested. "[deep breath]. I know what that feels like as well. It hurts, but I have no choice. I lie to everyone, including my parents and you, to keep me safe from the villains. Since you are a permanent superhero, you have to do the same as well. Just, try to tell him the truth, in a way that won't jeopardize us, ok?" Marinette asked. "I'll see what I can do." Alya replied. Marinette leaves, as Alya heads back home. She is in her bedroom with Nino, where she is trying to think how to do this. "Hey, you ok, Alya? You look worried." Nino asked. "Oh...uhh...I am fine. Just, a bit stressed." Alya replied. "Your stressed? Well, maybe I can help. What is stressing you out?" Nino asked. "Well..................I'm.....[signs]. Look, Nino. I really didn't want to tell you this, but I have to. I really wanted to you the truth, I really do. But, I was afraid of the effect it will have on us." Alya replied. "Affect? Wait, no. No, no, no, no, no. Please, anything but that. Anything!!!" Nino worried. "Are you ok? You look scared as I am." Alya asked. "Just, just tell me. I want to know." Nino replied. "Fine. [deep breath]. I'm no longer Rena Rouge." Alya said. "OH GOD....Please, don't say wait hold on what?" Nino asked. "I'm......no longer Rena Rouge. What? That is what you were scared about right?" Alya asked back. "No, well a bit. I was worried that you don't love me anymore." Nino replied. "WHAT???" That's insane, Nino. Of course I still love you. Why did you think that?" Alya asked. "I got scared because of how you said it. That's why. But, your no longer Rena Rouge. But why?" Nino asked back. "The truth is...Ladybug thinks that she needs a better holder of the Fox miraculous, since she is the guardian. She is still looking for someone worthy if it's power. Don't get me wrong, she still believes I am worthy of being a superhero. She just needs one more talented than me. She did promise me another miraculous if she can find one, so that is why I didn't show up. Now you know the truth." Alya replied. "Woah. I can understand that. Thank you for telling me, and it is ok. No way superheroes are going to ruin our relationship." Nino said. "That's sweet of you, Nino. Oh, speaking of superheroes, we have the new Ladybug and Cat Noir move to go to." Alya replied. "Oh, shot. I forgot. We better hurry." Nino said. At the movies, Nino gets mad because Carapace is not in it for some reason. His blood boils hotter when an upcoming trailer shows Cat Noir and Rena Rouge falling in love. This gets Nino mad, but Alya just tells him it is just a movie. Not real life. Nino calms down a bit, and is that way when the movie ends. The couple leaves the movies, as they leave, they see Andre the ice cream man. "Hey, want to get a nice treat, before we go?" Nino asked. He sees Alya texting on her phone. Alya is texting Marinette. "Did you hear me?" Nino asked as he approached her. "Oh, no. Sorry, I was checking stuff. What did you say?" Alya asked back. "I said, Andre is over there. Want to go get some ice cream?" Nino asked. "Oh....I can't. I have.......my blog to work on. Yep, my blog. Nothing important at all. Just my blog." Alya replied in a weird way. "You never reacted like that before." Nino said. "Like what?" Alya asked. "You act worried, and then start pause a bit." Nino replied. "I just said I need to do my blog. That's all. We can go next time. Sorry, Nino, but I need to go." Alya said as she leaves him. Nino feels a bit sad, and then he sees the poster for the upcoming MLB movie. The one with Cat Noir and Rena Rouge falling in love. That gets Nino mad, and he leaves(This ends rewrite portion #1. Here is more summarization of Rocketear).
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Miraculous Ladybug Season 4: The Collusion of Trauma
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