Here's my first review! BUT before we get started, Here's a quote to kick off this book celebrating writing: "Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing." -Benjamin Franklin
Title of short story: The Day I died
Author: @Love2write999
Genre: Random
Number of parts: 1
My description of this short story: This is the story of a young women who has gone to visit her sister's grave.
Thoughts and comments:
1.) Love2write999 did an excellent job of building tension.
2.) Her character has realistic thoughts as she navigates her way through the creepy old graveyard. As she travels through the cemetery, this main character begins to hear footsteps. She pushes her fears away, believing that it must be her mind making things up.
3.) This is a quick read, but definitely worth it!
4.) The author has great, descriptive words which set the scene for horror! (quote me on that)
5.) @henry1999 commented: "this is amazing!!! you're such an amazing writer. keep it up." @_NotSoPerfect_ commented: "Wow, I really like this short story, it's amazing." "You have an exceptional talent." - @cdjameson
If you're in a creepy mood, check this story out! If you've already read it, please give your thoughts and comments below! OR if you're interested, go read it and then come back and tell us what you think. All credit for this short story goes to the author.
(Remember, I (Lewis) am interesting in checking out some of YOUR works! I didn't have anything to suggest on this book because I believe it's already well done, but that doesn't mean I won't have advice on other stories so come on down!)
~Your faithful writer, Lewis
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