Hey, so this is my second book review here! I hope you enjoy this book as much as I did!!!- your faithful writer, Lewis
Book Title: The Secret of the Locket (it's Completed)
Author: Marvel_lover2
Genre: Action
Rating: PG (for violence)
Summary: Maria Brown has lived a pretty average life, but—like many other book characters-that is about to change! She is whisked off into an adventure full of secret agents, codes and even a little romance. NOTE: for those of you Marvel/ Avenger fans out there, the author has even added a place for Hawkeye! Join Maria as she struggles through the challenges which come from...being Maria.
Things to work on: Everybody wants the bad news first, right? So here's dinner and then the next blank is desert:) Anyway, most of this story is told through dialog and thought process which is fine and the conversation is pretty easily traceable, but sometimes, it needs a little more detail. There are only minor spelling errors. The main character (Maria) sometimes become extremely irritated quickly which (looking at her issues) is perfectly appropriate, but I would suggest a little more of the thought process (especially in the first fifteen chapters or so). Another thing I might add -which the author did a great job at in the end- is a hook. Every chapter should start and end with a hook (which I may write a chapter on at some point). The little romance seems a little rushed at points, but not terribly.
Things I liked: The book, over all, has a great ending and plot. Each scene is necessary which is very difficult to do sometimes. The chapters are pretty short which makes it a quick and easy read. There is an excellent first line! There are a lot of unexpected twists and turns!!!
Extra recommendation: I'm going to extra recommend Marvel_lover2's works because she's always appropriate and respectful of the reader. Here best line in this book was: "Pieces of my life that would not be replaced littered the street around me." (Maria Brown, Chapter one, Secret of the Locket, Marvel_lover2) READ IT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!
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