Sometimes rants, sometimes wacky ass shenanigans I come up while on the shitter, expect bad jokes, dark humor, lots of swearing and an angry synth.
Also anime girls in SFM.
Also also, no, this ain't a self insert harem or some bullshit like that, I...
It stood with him since he arrived to Fiction-City, even in his darkest hours, at this point it could've been considered a part of him.
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TheThotSlayer sat there, his knees on the ground watching with sadness, how his jacket was torn to pieces, how? Because a generic harem main character attacked him, his jacket taking most of the damage.
Everyone watched how the skeleton looked with sorrow his jacket destroyed beyond repair, tears couldn't come out, he was an skeleton after all, he can't taste nor feel anything, he doesn't have nerves nor organs for that.
"N̴͍͌͂͐̆̅̽̚͝O̶̩̲̲̳͚͍̣̠̺̭̽̏̈̿̋͋̀̚͝O̶͔͈̙̩͒͛̚ͅO̵̡̢̤̹̭̒̃̓Ȍ̶͖͍̈̄Ǫ̸̟̗͉͑́̉̽́̈́̃͠Õ̷̡̢̺̣̳̠̥͎̾̏̋͑̒̆̿͜O̶̼͌͗̎̄͑͛͝O̵̝̼̹̬͛̂̆̽͊̄͋͘ͅƠ̸͙̟͓̪̞̝̖̙̖̇͋͗͝O̸̡̱̲̊̏O̶̧͕̹̳͉̰̖̓̐̈̊̀O̷̰̣͎̹͆̓̅͠Ò̷̠̞̈́̕Ȯ̶̝̼̦̃̈̒͜͝Ó̶̢̳̹͖̺̘͗́̀́͆͗̀̚̕͜Ő̸̻͗O̶̢̪̭̘͉̖̒̊̽͊͗̚O̶̗͎̎͂͝͝O̴̡̮̘̗̜̳͝O̴̧̮̫̿͋ͅƠ̷͉̳͉̭̙̪͈̤̈Ỏ̷̢̮̈́͝Ǭ̴̗̰̹̝̻͍͙̳̭O̷̢͉͔̪̓̿̀̓̕͠Ǫ̴̩̯̭̝̞̩̈́̾͌̓Ǫ̵̨̙̥̜̟̺̲̳̈́Ơ̴͙̐̒̎͐̾̿̏͑Ò̵͍̖͈͔̲̽͗̑̊͝Ö̷̫̰̠̳͆̿" He screamed his sadness and anger.
In that day TheThotSlayer lost a part of him.
His drip.
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Emotional scenes, made to impact the reader in some way, may be anger, sadness or just straight up shock.
One of the best ways to make someone more inmersed in the story.
To fucking bad Wattpad authors don't know how nor when to make them.
THEY MOSTLY START WITH A SAD SCENE JUST TO MAKE THE READER FEEL PITY FOR THE MC.
BUT WHEN THEY TRY TO MAKE AN EMOTIONAL SCENE THEY JUST STRAIGHT UP FUCK UP, YOU ALL KNOW WHY? BECAUSE OF HOW SHITTY THEIR NARRATION IS!!!
WHY IN ALL OF FUCKING EXISTENCE ARE YOU WRITTING A BOOK LIKE IT WAS SOME FUCKING ROLPLAY SESION?!
Shithead 1: My name is jeff *Fucking dies*
THAT'S NOT HOW A FUCKING BOOK IS WRITEN, HOW THE FUCK DO YOU EXPECT TO MAKE SOMEONE INMERSED WHEN YOU LACK EVEN THE MINIMAL FORM OF NARATION?!
In the end emotional scenes don't impact as much because of narration, because let's admit it, if you read something with little narration and just characters talking it isn't inmersive.
Stories are made to inmerse yourself into another world, feel the emotions of the characters, put yourself in the shoes of the characters, both in good and bad moments.
BUT WHY TRY TO NARRATE SOMETHING GOOD WHEN YOU CAN MAKE A MORE LAZY AND UGLY NARRATION?!
MOTHERFUCKERS IT'S LITERALLY YOUR FUCKING STORIES, YOU CAN TAKE YOUR TIME TO WRITE THEM, I DON'T WANT AN STORY THAT TAKES 1 DAY TO PUBLISH BUT THE NARRATIONS AND PLOT IS GARBAGE!
OH BUT LET'S MAKE 100 STORIES THAT ARE THE SAME FUCKING SHIT! HAHAHAHA!
Well, this was a quick chapter, there's not mutch to talk about emotional scenes but how to make them inmersive, that being the narration, that I will rant in another chapter in more depth.
TTS out!
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