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"He doesn't smile, he doesn't laugh. The only emotion I see on his face is anger. He hates everything about me, my views, my dressing sense and my forward thoughts. It's not like I challenged his views on purpose, I tried my best to fol...
I love to dive into the mind of the characters, but I have discovered a weakness. It's hard to give a proper pov to abusive ones, murderers are fine, but characters like Saad are a bit too complex for me.
I tried to pen down his thoughts, and two versions came out, one where it seemed as if I was justifying his abuse and another where he was extremely disgustingly brutal, but that's not how point of views works.
In the last chapter, I was unfair to Ayesha too, I will deep dive into her character a bit more, but I don't think most readers like her and I understand the reason behind it. I want to be fair to all my characters give them a proper character arc (which they have), but I don't want to steal their pov or mess it up.
I have a few questions, I have prepared a thread for it on twitter, so we can discuss directly. And you guys can provide me with your own views and insights on the characters because it will be helpful.
I am not delaying the updates on purpose it's just that I am unable to place myself in Saad's mind, I have been watching a lot of interviews from 1970's, reading about men, their thoughts and listening to podcasts.
That's why I needed your help, because more than me the characters are yours.
So I have started a thread, with a bunch of questions, here is the link to it.
If you guys don't have a twitter account comment or send me a message through the ngl link.
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I am not heading into the direction of Stockholm syndrome or his character redeeming himself completely and falling for Seher. This story is about Seher, I just want to add Saad's pov here.
