Certainly! Here's the revised version with corrected grammar and spelling:
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Aezhar: The first song is about to play. Alara, may I have this dance?
(Murmurs from the crowd are heard.)
“Murmur, is Princess Alara going to be the girl who will marry the Crown Prince?”
“I’m sure. Look at them; they are definitely dating.”
“Then what about Zewiar?”
“Oh, he’s standing there with Sanem Frain.”
“Today’s generation changes their partners like clothes.”
Aezhar: I think today is an unlucky day for some people. They’re going to regret this grand ball.
Alara: Let them say what they want.
Aezhar: But I like how they say we look better as a couple. Ah, the song is finished.
Alara: Let’s go to the balcony. It’s beautiful, and I want a rest from these people . (I said to him)
Certainly! Here is the revised part with Alara's thoughts:
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Alara (thinking to herself): The main reason I wanted to come here was to confess my feelings to him. This is the perfect place; the side balcony is not well known.
Aezhar: Wow, it’s a great place, Alara. … Alara, I want to tell you something. As always, I don’t know how to start. My feelings for you developed so quickly that I didn’t realize I had fallen for you until it was too late. I want to stay by your side, but unfortunately, I have to leave tomorrow. It’s okay if you don’t love me; I will always love you. That’s what I wanted to say to you before I go.
Alara: Aezhar… You know, I always hated my life. This body felt like a cage to me. I always cursed my life; living every day was like hell. But then, slowly, everything started to fall into place—my relationships, my business, my dreams. And then you came. The life I hated the most became so important to me that now I want to live longer. The love I always thought was betrayal—you proved me wrong. The moment I saw you, the way you are with other girls, the way you always make me feel special, always standing up for me, your priority was always me. Without realizing it, I was falling in love with you deeper and deeper. (Tears filled her eyes.) Aezhar, I— I love yo—
(Suddenly, Alara fainted.)
Aezhar: Alara, Alara, wake up, please! What happened to you?
Alara: (Weakly) Why is your voice and hands shaking so much, Aezhar… (She thought to herself as she lost consciousness again.)
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A Cost Of Suicide
FantasiAlara wakes up in an unfamiliar world, having reincarnated into the life of a character from a novel she once read. Her new identity belongs to a young woman destined to suffer for the sake of the story's protagonists. Haunted by memories of her pas...
