He's Basically My Brother M.C.

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"we were cuddling" i hug lukes chest

"i said to take care of her, not have sex with her!" mikey almost shouted

"i wasnt planning to!" luke countered

"yeah sure luke" he rolled his eyes

"we're going jerry" he grabbed my arm

"no michael! i wanna stay with lukey" i try pulling my arm, but his grip tightened

"she wants to be with me mate!" luke shouted

"thats the alcohol talking" he muttered and dragged me outside

"michael whats your problem?" i whine

"that hes messing with my kitty" he folded his arms

"i-but-you-" i stuttered

"get in the car" he said sternly

"what about calum?" i asked

"hes probably with some chick, he'll find a way home" he said and closed my door. he walked over to the drivers side and opened the door. he sat in the seat and started the car.

let me just say, it was the quietest car ride ive ever had with michael.

"youre probably tired, go to sleep" he said looking in the mirror to check up on me.

"its only... 11?" i checked my phone and my statement turned into more of a question than a statement.

"sleep" he said and focused back onto the road

michaels pov:

the soft snoring continued as i pulled up into the driveway of her house. lets see. should i be a total jerk to her, or a nice guy to her? i'd pick being a jerk to her any day over being a nice guy to her.

i open the door and slam it loudly. i saw her jerk up through the window.

"oh sorry did i wake you up?" i say sarcastically opening her door

"uh yes you did, and i need a good rest" she said rudely

"from what? drinking alcohol and so called 'cuddling' with luke" i said with finger air quotes

"ok, i was somewhat sober when that happened, and we didn't do... the do" she said embarrassingly

"get out, its starting to get cold" i rolled my eyes and walked to the door" this woman- no girl is starting to piss me off, like any other day

"youre a contemptibly obnoxious person" she blurts out

"oh kitty, you wont be saying that after we're in bed" i shot her a smirk and saw her face starting to get pink

"now lets get inside its almost 12" i say casually and walk to the door

this was full of dialog lmao is that good or bad?