Entry Number Thirteen (10/29/2013)

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Dear readers,

We just recently switched groups in my Creative Writing class and I'm doing some critiques right now. 

So... I understand the writing being kind of bad, but how in the hell can you be on your third draft OF A CREATIVE FUCKING NONFICTION and have a paper that MAKES NO FUCKING SENSE. Or even a SHITLOAD of sentences THAT MAKE NO FUCKING SENSE!!! HOLY FAWKING SHITE MAN! Like these are just fucking bad. One of them kept wandering off topic and was so unfocused that I had difficulty figuring out what the topic even fucking was. The one I'm critiquing now is written by someone who obviously just doesn't know how to write sentences.

I can't help just hating whoever's writing these pieces (which I don't know, because THEY DIDN'T FUCKING PUT THEIR NAMES ON THEM). This is what happens when I critique someone's work. This is why it is a fucking horrible idea for me to critique any of my friends' work. If you're a horrible writer, I WILL start to hate you.

But of course I won't say any of this to them, I will give them constructive criticism and ways to fix their writing (Not that I think it'll do them any good. If they've already gone through two rounds of critiques and this is the crap they manage to write, then I'm pretty sure nothing I tell them is going to redeem their pieces).

Oh my fuck though.

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Just got back from class. I actually quite like the girl who wrote the religion piece, but whatever...

Gotta study for a test I have at 4 that I have not studied for in the least (I'm pretty screwed).

Seeyaa 

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