The Retweet

chapter 16

** listen to Treat You Better; Shawn Mendes **
Noah's POV
        I pull up at my house and enter. I head into my room and feel my phone buzz; Peyton. I see the text: night Noah. I reply: night Pey 👅 . I lock my phone and think 'there's something about her that make me feel....' I change into pajamas and get into bed.
** 1 month later **
        Peyton and I have been spending a lot of time together ever since we met. We enter Disneyland and Peyton take a video of me; I stick my tongue out. I feel kinda bad that Jace doesn't get to hang out with his girlfriend all the time because of work. We get into the line for the Tower of Terror. I take out my phone and take a picture of Peyton; spending the day with this one. We get into the elevator and get into our seats. The ride starts and we get to the top. I feel something grab my hand.~ Peyton. I squeeze it and we go down. We go on most of the rides and we end with the fireworks. Peyton asks someone to take a boomerang of us; we eat cotton candy and smile.~ we thank them and Peyton posts it; magical day @noahurrea. I post a picture of us at the castle; #fantabulous @peyy.coleman.
Peyton's POV
        I pull out my phone and tweet; 5 hours of being a kid with @noahurrea. I put my phone away and Noah takes my hand. We exit and get into his car. I turn on the radio and treat you better started playing. Noah starts singing " I know I can treat you better than he can. And any girl like you deserves a gentleman. Tell me why are we wasting time. On all your wasted crying. When you should be with me instead. I know I can treat you better. Better than he can."~ I record all of it. Noah looks at me and says 'Peyton why are you dating Jace?'~ I furrow my eyebrows. I think 'why am I dating Jace?' I play with my thumb and mumble "because he loves me." Noah pulls over and says 'do you love him?'~ I freeze. I look up at Noah and a tear rolls down my cheek.~ He wipes it away. I say ' I like him.' " like?"~ I nod.
         Noah takes my hands and says 'Peyton tell me the truth; don't hurt yourself.'~ I cry. Noah pulls me into his chest and I smell his cologne. Noah lifts up my chin and whispers 'tell me.' I breathe in and say 'I don't have feelings for him anymore.' I move back and I hear Noah whisper "Pey, you need to tell him. He needs to know."~ I close my eyes. Noah kisses my hand and says 'I'll be here for you.'~ he smiles. We pull up to Jace's house and I see his car. My heart drops and I look back at Noah.
Jace's POV
  I hear the doorbell ring; I head to the front door. I open it and see Peyton. I go in for a hug and Peyton stands back.~ I furrow my eyebrows. Peyton walks to the living and says 'Jace we need to talk.'~ I sit on the couch across from her. I clear my throat and say 'what's up?' Peyton moves closer and whispers ' I think we should breakup.'~ I lean back into the chair. I take her hands and say 'is this what you want?'~ she nods. I sniff and think 'this can't be happening.' Peyton stands up and says 'I'm really sorry Jace.' She lets go off my hand and leaves through the front door. I close the door and kick it.
Narrator's POV
      Peyton gets in Noah's car and starts to cry. Noah takes her into his arms and says 'it's ok Peyton. I'm gonna be here for you.'~ he kisses her forehead. 

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