Is Your Warriors OC A Mary-Sue?

Silvereye

This OC was submitted by theanonymouskitten.

Name: Silvereye

Nickname: N/A

Clan/Rank: ThunderClan/Clan of the Windward Valley

Ooh, I like that. I like how you gave two Clans for canon and original, not too many people do that. And I like the name too.

Apprentice(s): Adderpaw

Gender: Tom-cat

Looks: Silvereye is a light grey tabby tom with darker gray stripes.He is the runt of his litter but is the most talented. He has two piercing silver eyes hence the name. one ‘X’ shaped scar on his left shoulder.

Mate/Crush/Kit(s): None/Mintleaf/Littlepaw

At first I didn't understand this, but once I read his bio, then I understood why he had a kit and no mate.

Sexuality: Assumingly Heterosexual  (Straight)

Age: 28 moons

Parents: Loneear and Tawnywing

Siblings: Cottontail and Rainpetal

Bio/Backstory: As a kit he was born the runt of his litter and despite being siblings he was ostracized from the others. He ended up befriending Mintleaf though they fought a lot on their first moon they knew each other resulting with him injuring Mintleaf in the end they became good friends. when Silvereye became an apprentice later then his siblings, has father and the deputy Loneear had been afraid that his size would make it harder then him. Silvereye was furious at the time and had run fam the came to prove himself. During his time out he'd tried to catch a sparrow that had landed to feed, he ended up getting hurt by it after failing and got his scar. Afterwards the warriors retrieved him and took him to the current medicine cat honeyleaf. As an apprentice he and Mintleaf hung out together a lot, despite the fact the other was a medicine cat’s apprentice. This was because of his siblings neglecting to show him any empathy, so he stuck to Mintleaf who was his best friend. He became a warrior the day of his warrior assessment he awarded his mentor liontuft two squirrels a vole and a sparrow. when he turned 18 moons Silvereye witnessed a rogue she-cat die Due to being impaled by a falling tree branch as she was moving to a safer best during a windstorm, leaving him to take care of a small 3 moon old kit in which he named littlekit (whom of which is now littlepaw). During his 22nd Moon he was appointed the mentor of Adderpaw, who he is still training, to soon be a warrior.

I love his backstory, though it doesn't really explain how he's related to Ivypool...

Relation to any main characters?: Ivypool

Likes: Littlepaw, Mintleaf, being a father, taking a well deserved break once in awhile, Adderpaw, being respected.

Dislikes: his siblings, being treated differently, being pitied, feeling small, sparrows

Strengths: stealthy he is almost impossible to track, this was learned through liontuft she often taught him stealth. Witty, fast.

Weaknesses: size, temper, littlepaw and Mintleaf, his ocd.

His strengths and weaknesses are quite balanced and I honestly don't see that too often.

Extras:
Personality: Silvereye is short tempered and generally negative, but he often switches his behavior when around Littlepaw in attempt to be a better father figure. He really dislikes it when he is underestimated and often overdoes things.He is very OCD about getting things just right.

Why have I never, until now, had personality as a required apsect... I don't know, but his personality is really good.

So I give this OC:
95% Original
5% Changeable