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Flurryfall

This OC was submitted by Scourge_lover156.

Name: Flurrykit/Flurrypaw/Flurryfall

Nickname: oftentimes called Snowflurry by Leafstrike

Okay, I'm confused, is Leaf's name LeafSTRIKE, or LeafFLIGHT? But his nickname is adorable!

Clan/Rank: RiverClan/former deputy

Apprentice(s): Foxpaw (who would go on to become Foxfoot, then Foxstar), Snowpaw (died as an apprentice)

Gender: Tom-cat

Looks: Flurryfall is a huge white tom with broad shoulders and a lithe frame, his tail-tip, front right paw-tips, ear-tips, and chin are black and he has yellow-green eyes and tufted ears, his nose has a dash of gray on it and he has big paws, the fur around his neck is especially fluffed out, causing him to have minor problems swimming, but better protection during battle

Personality: Flurryfall has a rather calm nature with a big opinion on a lot of debates within the Clan, he believes in respect and loyalty and while he may come off as hard-headed, he is a deep thinker and a generally kind and patient tom

Mate/Crush/Kit(s): None/ N/A /None

Sexuality: always defined as hetero, but has shown major affection for unrelated toms

Age: 35 moons

Wow, he died young...

Parents: Stagflight (father) Sunpatch (mother)

Siblings: Leafflight (sister; named after her father)

Again, LeafSTRIKE, or LeafFLIGHT?

Bio/Backstory: Flurryfall was born within the Clans and went through an almost normal apprenticeship until the end, on the day he became a warrior, his mother was killed by a ThunderClan warrior in a mouse-brained border skirmish over sunningrocks, unlike his sister Leafpaw, he never swore vengeance, never held a grudge against the warrior, and while his mother's death added a sour taste to his ceremony, making it a bitter-sweet memory, he pushed on, he mourned the loss of his mother, but didn't let it slow him down, he earned his warrior name, Flurryfall, and his sister became Leafflight, in later moons, Flurryfall's father retired early due to constant pain in his neck and stomach, and he died almost four moons later, Leafflight, an otherwise optimistic and fairly healthy she-cat, contracted her father's disease because it ran in the family, she passed six moons after her father did, Flurryfall feared that he would be next for the disease, but he never got it, much to his surprise, at about 20 moons, he received his first apprentice, and Foxpaw flew through his training almost without fail (except his first moon, which was a failure), then, at thirty moons old, he got Snowpaw to train, through his own hardship and loyal spirit, he was chosen to be the Clan's next deputy at 33 moons old, but it was short-lived, as he was brutally injured during an attack by foxes and his second apprentice was killed, he was heavily wounded, but refused to let any pain show as he wanted others to be treated first, he took it upon himself to check the territory to make sure the foxes had left, but he collapsed just after moonhigh, dying beside the river, he never regretted the choices he had made, and was happy to be welcomed by his family into StarClan

Okay... again, the bio says LeafFLIGHT, but you said LeafSTRIKE earlier... but other than the name crisis, I love the backstory!

Relation to any main characters?: None

Likes: swimming (of course), rainy nights, leaf-fall (yes, the air gets cold and the river is frosted, he just loved the feeling the season brings), kits, snow

Dislikes: mid greenleaf (gets way to hot for his thick coat), loud noises, engaging in combat

Strengths: he has long legs and big, webbed paws, making him an excellent, swift swimmer (despite his extra neck fur) and his paws can do quite the damage, he is exceptionally patient and keen-eyed, able to think in a moment's notice,

Weaknesses: he is sometimes described as hot-headed and arrogant, although those traits have been abandoned in recent moons, he is claustrophobic and feels uncomfortable hunting below the water surface, he isn't too stealthy, being clumsy because of his paws

Extras: He was going to have kits with Maplebreeze before he died, the tortoisehsell she-cat had kits with another tom
Flurryfall always had a unique obsession with arachnids and insects

Oh, poor Flurryfall... but that's new, don't really see cats who have interests in bugs like that.