Minnowsong (My OC Example)

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Name: Minnowsong

Original, and based off of myself, being that my last name sounds like Minnow and I love music.

Nickname: Minnow

Clan/Status: FoxClan

FanClan! I don't give these too harsh reviews, but I 'try' to avoid them... Not really...

Rank: Warrior

Lots of these, try to make an OC more original, not too many Elder OC's are there?

Apprentice(s): None

Gender: She-cat

Looks: http://sagesorcerer.deviantart.com/art/Minnowsong-600010963

If I didn't know that Minnowsong was based on me, I'd say that design is SOOO Mary-Sue!

Mate: Willowflight

Sexuality: Either bisexual or heterosexual, hasn't really figured it out yet.

That is original, not knowing what they are and still finding out is not heard of often.

Age: 13 moons

Young and lively!

Parents: Foxstar and Shadesky (Cover cats [Foxstar: left; Shadesky: right])

Daughter of a leader... Not very original, but I needed Foxstar to have kits so...

Siblings: Cryptleg and Sparkface

Bio/Backstory: Born to the FoxClan leader, Foxstar, Minnowkit was second of her litter, after Cryptkit. She was slightly small but was teased only rarely. She would enjoy chasing Sparkkit's tail and wrestling with Cryptkit. When she was apprenticed, she was mentored by Brightblossom, Cryptpaw was mentored by Animalleaf, and Sparkpaw was mentored by Duststripe. She learned how to fight, hunt, climb trees, and other things that FoxClan apprentices learn. By the time she was able to go to her first gathering on the island, she couldn't wait to meet the other Clans. When she stepped foot on the island she found a group of older apprentices from other Clans. A SunClan apprentice named Woodpaw she realized caught the attention of Cryptpaw, who started to talk to him. Woodpaw was shy, but soon opened up to Cryptpaw, and then to Minnowpaw and Sparkpaw. Minnowpaw asked the older apprentices if Woodpaw has been at any gatherings before, and they just shook their heads. Fast forward about four or five moons and Minnowpaw was given the name Minnowsong. Sitting her vigil with her newly name Clanmates, Willowflight, Cryptleg, and Sparkface, she heard movement in the forest followed by the scent of CloudClan! She silently alerted the other new warriors and they silently returned the signal. Creeping forward, the warriors confronted an attack patrol from CloudClan made of Mousestar, Ravenleap, Amberstream, Sunfall and Uniquesnow. Willowflight let out a yowl which alerted the camp and had warriors ready to fend the attacking cats off. FoxClan greatly outnumbered the ambush patrol and they fled with their tails between their legs! Minnowsong had had a crush on Willowflight for a while until now and she decided to confess to him. He shyly accepted her confession and the two of them became mates, since Willowflight had feelings for Minnow as well. One month later and the two of them aren't planning on having kits, but who knows?

Backstory I don't think is too overused, but don't expect any OC reviews for Cryptleg, Sparkface, or Willowflight, because they are all basically here. Willowflight's parents are different though, but that's not too important...

Relation to any main characters?: Mother's Mother's Father's Mother, Ruby, who connects her to a sh*t ton of other characters.

Don't judge me, I know it's not original, but at least I didn't make Lightningstar (Ruby's son) the son of Firestar or Scourge! That would really piss me off! And this is my own character! But this is not very original...

Likes: Mice, Willowflight, Being on border patrols, Mystery, the smell of blood

Dislikes: Breezepelt (Who the f*** doesn't?), Mousestar, blackbird

Strengths: Able to be fast and able to hide easily due to her small size

Weaknesses: Can be very loud at times and can't climb trees very well...

This is me...

Extras: She has ADHD and a very bad case of it.

and me again...

So overall, I give my own character a 90% original, and 10% not.

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